Reviews by Leany

Elanor's Revenge · Thu Sep 16, 2004 1:21 pm

I just wanted to say that I just finished reading chapter 22. Perhaps I am one of the people that are still sticking around, but let me stress that it is for a good reason. Your take on the whole situation is refreshingly different, and a pleasure to read. I do very much hope that Nerwen and Rúmil will work out their difficulties. Thanks again for not abandoning this story, and if you write it, I'll read it!

Leany

The Crux of the Problem · Mon May 03, 2004 5:49 pm

It was the originality of the disclaimer that made me continue reading. And as I commented to a friend not 10 minutes ago... you know the story's got promise if the disclaimer makes you laugh. Well done Very Happy smiley face

Daughter of Kings · Thu Apr 01, 2004 3:17 am

I have discovered this story purely by accident, and spent the last 24 hours reading it. I only stopped to get some sleep, and would not even have done that, if I wasn't in danger of keeling over. Having said that... I find your story to be delightful. There is enough interaction with Tolkien's original work to make it believable, and you have managed to add a rather heartbreaking twist to it. I am thoroughly amused at Legolas' almost-British reserve in doing anything, for fear that "society would have him do otherwise". I beg of you to let him come to his senses before it is too late. It is invigorating to see an OFC who is anything *but* a whimpering female. I may not always agree with Alaran's thoughts or actions, but at least she has the courage to do something.

One small side comment: in reading this story, I stumbled upon a few sentences that I would consider mildly run-on, as well as some minor grammar errors. Most of these appeared to be the result of an edit, where part of a sentence was removed. They were not serious enough to "raise my hackles", but perhaps it would be prudent to keep an eye on them? Other than that, this is a job well done.

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