Reviews for "The Crux of the Problem"

Sun Apr 04, 2004 10:23 pm

Hello Shana! Welcome to OSA. Wave smiley face

I'm sure your wonderful fictions are going to be a great success around here. I love the two songs you chose for the latest chapter of The Crux. They are wonderful and I know them by heart. They set the mood of the scene perfectly. This is my favorite story of all that you have written, as I already told you, and people who are fond of Haldir should read it for sure. Please, keep doing this wonderful job! Bounce smiley face

Sat Apr 24, 2004 3:02 pm

Well, first I love all of the stories you're doing. But I have to admit I prefer Legolas to Haldir.
But either way I will continue to read and enjoy your tales.

How about leaving her with the twins?

LJ

Sun Apr 25, 2004 10:10 am

Bravo! I love Haldir! I'm so glad this isn't a "Mary-Sue" you've done a great job developing Jan, she's a really outstanding character. I look forward to reading the upcoming chapters...I hope I won't have to wait too long. I'll be checking back Very Happy smiley face

Michelle

Mon May 03, 2004 5:49 pm

It was the originality of the disclaimer that made me continue reading. And as I commented to a friend not 10 minutes ago... you know the story's got promise if the disclaimer makes you laugh. Well done Very Happy smiley face

Tue Jun 21, 2005 9:07 am

Very interesting. Any hope for a new chapter??? Very Happy smiley face

Sun Jan 29, 2006 5:08 pm

Yay! Excellent chappie. I'm so glad you are back to writing. I like the inner conflict and comraderie between Haldir and Celeborn. LMAO at the porno comments. Laughing smiley face

Hugs,
Talasi

Mon Jan 30, 2006 8:21 pm

Great chapter... evil, evil cliffhanger Shocked smiley face

Why, oh why do you insist on torturing us so! Laughing smiley face

I love Haldir and Janessa. I could clearly picture Haldir scowling at Areniel while he and Janessa were dancing Laughing smiley face

. I thought that the scene where Janessa dances with Areniel, in order to boost his confidence, was very nice. I really enjoyed that scene a lot.

Soooooooo...who is it that has Janessa so freaked out at the end of that chapter? Ohhh, I can't wait to find out!

Keep up the great work! Update soon Wink smiley face

Michelle...

Sat Feb 11, 2006 8:46 pm

I think I have reviewed this elsewhere but you do not have enough reviews here. You deserve more for this wonderful story. I'm off to find the companion to this story. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.

Sun Feb 19, 2006 9:25 am

Great chapter, Shanastay!

I've enjoyed this story since the beginning, and I'm still enjoying it now. I do feel very sorry for Legolas Sad smiley face

, but I have hope that he will find someone who will love him as much as he loves Janessa.

So Haldir and Janessa are going to be together now...for good. Wonderful! I can't wait to see how Haldir, Janessa, and Legolas's stories end.

Michelle...

Tue May 03, 2016 6:54 pm

I am sort of confused.
Is there an order to the stories.

I read the one w/ Haldir and Char and it spoke of how Jannessa broke Haldir.

What happened there??

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