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"Mysterious Fate" (NC-17)
by Cormak.
Chapters [37]
Reviews [ 98] Warnings [minor language, battle scenes, sex between adults]
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Sun Feb 20, 2005 1:31 am
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The pace of this story is absolutley perfect...in my opinion 
I would have been somewhat disappointed if Legolas and Kaitlyn had instantly professed their undying love for one another. While I'm pretty sure that they love each other very much, the consequences of love between and elf and a mortal, should be explored. I love the way you've developed the relationships in Kaitlyn's life. Aragorn has become such an important figure in her life...I hope that she takes his advice to heart - especially since he speaks from experience.
Lovely chapter, Cormak...as usual! I can't wait to read more 
Michelle... |
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The King's Vineyard (R)
by MaryA.
Chapters [50]
Reviews [ 77] Warnings [Some mature sexual situations/later chapters]
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Sun Feb 20, 2005 1:06 am
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I loved chapter 41. It was very romantic...very sensual. The descriptions of the intimacy between Thranduil and Cella were outstanding. You've really captured the love between these two superbly.
Chapter 42 was great, as well. I really enjoyed the part when Legolas told Cella about Thranduil's past emotional state, and how she brings his father joy. The fact that Legolas approves of Cella definitely shows how highly the other elves probably think of her.
I'm very happy that Uncle Dwain and Milda are there! I know Cella was anxious about her uncle's reaction to her new relationship with Thranduil; but I'm sure that she's happy to finally have her family and her friends with her now. It can't be easy being the only human among elves.
Great job, Mary! I can't wait to find out how everyone reacts to Cella's relationship with Thranduil...this should be interesting.
Michelle... |
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Crossroads of Time (PG-13)
by ellie.
Chapters [24]
Reviews [ 76] Warnings [violence; suggestive situations]
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Sun Feb 20, 2005 12:40 am
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Great chapter, Ellie!
You've definitely managed to keep me guessing with this story; I had no idea that Ariella was even thinking about doing such a drastic thing.
The way that Ariella confronted each of her suitors was so sad; knowing that each of their hearts would be broken. While they both handled her confession fairly well, I couldn't help but feel extremely sorry for Lhûnedhel - especially since we know that actually has NO ONE to love  So sad...
The end of the chapter was great! I was wondering if anyone would save her, and sure enough, someone did. Yay! Lovely chapter! Can't wait to read more...
Michelle... |
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New Magic - A Tale of a Blue Wizard (NC-17)
by Ingole.
Chapters [20]
Reviews [ 29]
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Tue Feb 08, 2005 5:11 pm
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I love the way you've written these wonderful characters. Tari is a wonderful character; very witty and charming. Her interaction with Celeborn is fantastic...I'm very interested in seeing how their relationship will progress.
Great story! It has humor, romance, and suspense; all rolled into one great story! Can't wait for more.
Michelle... |
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Crossroads of Time (PG-13)
by ellie.
Chapters [24]
Reviews [ 76] Warnings [violence; suggestive situations]
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Tue Feb 08, 2005 4:48 pm
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Oh, no! Glorfindel has it all wrong, and he won't even listen to Ariella! Poor Ariella...poor Glorfindel! 
So, all three of them are interested in her...and want to marry her! Wow! I feel sorry for all of them; but mostly for Ariella. She has to make sure that her actions do not affect the outcome of the future. Poor Ariella!
I did find her conversation with Idril very interesting. Perhaps, she is meant to be with ONE of her suitors...hopefully, that ONE will be Glorfindel
The others can find another elleth
Great job, Ellie! I'm going to start calling you "EVIL ELLIE" if you keep leaving cliffhangers like this! 
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Michelle... |
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The King's Vineyard (R)
by MaryA.
Chapters [50]
Reviews [ 77] Warnings [Some mature sexual situations/later chapters]
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Sat Feb 05, 2005 10:56 am
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Another wonderful chapter, Mary!
I love the way that Cella is adapting to her new home. Lothriel seems like a good friend to Cella. When Lothriel told Cella about the preperations that had been made for her, before she had arrived, I couldn't help but smile Thranduil wanted everything to be perfect for her when she got there *SIGH* So romantic...
Loved the final scene of the chapter, too! Very hot!
Great job, Mary! I'll be looking out for your next update.
Michelle... |
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Crossroads of Time (PG-13)
by ellie.
Chapters [24]
Reviews [ 76] Warnings [violence; suggestive situations]
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Wed Feb 02, 2005 7:31 pm
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Wow!  Great chapter!
Poor Lhûnedhel, I felt kind of sorry for him when Ariella didn't respond to his declaration. I could just picture a poor, pouty-mouthed elf, sulking away... *sigh*
But on the other hand, there's Istadan. What's up with him? I think he thought Ariella's reaction meant that maybe she had feelings for him. Is that what he thought?
And Glorfindel. He should have just said what he had to say, and gotten it over with! I felt like shaking, slapping, and yelling at him all at once. LOL! That darn servant just had to walk in at *THAT* moment . Grrrrr.........
Her relationships are getting very complicated. I love it! Keep up the good work...you're definitely keeping me guessing with this story.
You are evil for leaving that cliffy at the end, but that's okay...I forgive you. Just write more, and post more soon!
Michelle... |
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The Snow of Caras Galadhon (R)
by Emmess.
Chapters [3]
Reviews [ 5] Warnings [none]
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Wed Feb 02, 2005 7:16 pm
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I always love reading about Haldir's softer side. His relationship with Nefredil is very sweet; I'll enjoy reading about how their relationship will develop. Very nice beginning to the story...I can't wait to read more.
Michelle... |
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The King's Vineyard (R)
by MaryA.
Chapters [50]
Reviews [ 77] Warnings [Some mature sexual situations/later chapters]
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Sat Jan 29, 2005 8:42 pm
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Thranduil, Thranduil...how could you not love that elf?! The proclamation at the end was quite a shocker I definitely wasn't expecting him to say *THAT*
This story is extremely romantic, and I absolutely love it!
Fantastic work, Mary! I'll be eagerly awaiting your next update
Michelle... |
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Crossroads of Time (PG-13)
by ellie.
Chapters [24]
Reviews [ 76] Warnings [violence; suggestive situations]
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Mon Jan 24, 2005 11:41 am
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Go Ariella!
Ariella really does have all of the hottest elves around chasing after her, doesn't she! Lhunedhel, Istadan, Glorfindel...she has them all! Lucky girl!
I'm really interested in seeing how she'll juggle spending time with each of the elves; while, not interfering with the past...so that she will not affect the future. Tricky, tricky...no wonder she's concerned about what she's doing there.
Linanna's observation about Ariella's "company" made me laugh. I was thinking the exact same thing.
Wonderful job, Ellie! Your updates are always worth the wait Keep up the great work, and update soon!
Michelle... |
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