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Crossroads of Time (PG-13)
by ellie.
Chapters [24]
Reviews [ 76] Warnings [violence; suggestive situations]
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Tue Nov 02, 2004 1:54 pm
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Oh no! What's goin' on?!!! I know when people are under stress they often seek comfort in others... but Lhûnedhel? They seemed to be getting awfully cozy with one another  Not good. And I know that you writers really enjoy trying to trick us readers...you really got me good with this part:
"She felt arms envelope her as she was pulled sideways into a tight embrace. She
nuzzled against the warm presence beside her, desperately needing the comfort only
another living being could provide." - Crossroads of Time
I just knew, for sure, that it was Glorfindel that was embracing her. I'm sorry if I'm being repetative but I'm completely shocked! I never would have seen Lhûnedhel and Ariella EVEN becoming friends...especially seeing as how they started off on the wrong foot. Nice twist 
This was yet another fantastic chapter, Ellie. You're doing a wonderful job and I hope that you'll update soon
Michelle... |
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The King's Vineyard (R)
by MaryA.
Chapters [50]
Reviews [ 77] Warnings [Some mature sexual situations/later chapters]
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Sat Oct 30, 2004 10:20 pm
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So she's decided to work on him subtly...very good idea! I don't see him giving in to her anytime soon, even though she is making progress. But who knows, right?
And whose clothing did she receive? Thranduil said that it had only been worn once, so now I'm wondering, who the clothing belonged to?
Very nice chapter! Update soon...I'm very anxious to find out how she makes out in her new home...
Michelle... |
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Crossroads of Time (PG-13)
by ellie.
Chapters [24]
Reviews [ 76] Warnings [violence; suggestive situations]
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Thu Oct 28, 2004 7:50 pm
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What a great chapter! I was so shocked and happy that Celoril and Elindir realized that they had been treating Ariella unfairly. Their apology to her was very unexpected and I think Ariella handled the situation very well... 
Ariella's reaction to Glorfindel's nakedness was hilarious. He actually seemed amused and somewhat pleased by her reaction. I guess he didn't mind her looking, heh? That's VERY interesting...
I'm getting nosy-vibes from Lhûnedhel. LOL!! He seems like they type that would snoop around to find out exactly what Ariella is about, and where she's from. I don't see him giving up on finding out more about her.
I loved the chapter! It's great to see the relationships that Ariella are now developing, and it's great to see other's becoming more accepting of her. I felt like the ending of the chapter was very important to the story, and was written fantastically. We now know that Ariella's actions have affected the future. Hmm, or have they? Has her healing of Maeglin changed the future? So many questions!
Keep up the good work, and I'll be looking out for your next update,
Michelle... |
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The King's Vineyard (R)
by MaryA.
Chapters [50]
Reviews [ 77] Warnings [Some mature sexual situations/later chapters]
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Mon Oct 25, 2004 9:25 pm
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Cella really is spreading her wings, isn't she. I'm sure Thranduil had no clue that little Cella could be so persistant. The ending was so sweet...persistance really does pay off
Loved the chapter, update soon...
Michelle... |
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The King's Vineyard (R)
by MaryA.
Chapters [50]
Reviews [ 77] Warnings [Some mature sexual situations/later chapters]
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Wed Oct 20, 2004 10:43 am
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Go Cella! I'm so excited about Cella's newfound boldness! I love it. I can't believe she's finally opening up about her feelings...and discovering that she is grown enough to make decisions about the relationships in her life. I loved Thranduil's reaction to Cella...I can't wait to find out how this conversation that they are having will unfold.
Fantastic chapter! Update soon...
Michelle... |
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From Darkness to Light (R)
by Kendra.
Chapters [18]
Reviews [ 43] Warnings [Sexual Content]
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Wed Oct 20, 2004 10:14 am
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YAAYYYYYYY!
What a great...ending?? Yaaaayyyyyyyyy!!!!!! I'm so happy that Miran and Legolas will be starting their life together. I started to get a little worried when Miran mentioned Legolas's inevitable sailing to the West. Whew...I love happy endings!
You've done an amazing job on this story. I was completely enchanted by it from the beginning, all the way to the end. Your writing is so descriptive, and the emotions of your characters are conveyed so well. And the love scenes! Let's not even get me started on those! Each of the love scenes that you've written for this story, actually serves a purpose...to show the love and desperate passion between Legolas and Miran. If that was indeed your intention, then you definitely succeeded. Very well done!
Keep writing. I'll be looking out for your next story...perhaps a sequel?
I love this story, and I thank you for sharing it with us
Michelle.... |
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"Mysterious Fate" (NC-17)
by Cormak.
Chapters [37]
Reviews [ 98] Warnings [minor language, battle scenes, sex between adults]
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Mon Oct 11, 2004 8:28 pm
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Hi,
I'm so sorry I've never reviewed this story, I thought I had, but apparently I was wrong. I'll remedy that now. I've been reading this story for a while now, and I absolutely love everything about your story. You've created a great emotional foundation for each of the characters that you've developed. The relationships that Kaitlyn has with her new family is so believable and so touching.
Your latest chapter was an absolute emotional rollercoaster for me. And I still don't know Kaitlyn's fate! ***sighs*** Legolas's realization of his feeling was so moving. And his conversation with Aragorn REALLY had me in tears...I'm not ashamed to admit it! I'm really nervous about finding out what is going to happen with Kaitlyn. When/If she wakes up, what will happen between Kaitlyn and Legolas? And was her destiny or her "fate" to save Aragorn or is there more? Will she be sent home now that her destiny has been fulfilled? So many questions, so many questions...
As far as waiting for updates is concerned...I don't mind waiting. I know that when you finally post, that the chapter will be quality work...entertaining, enchanting...amazing! Keep up the good work, I'll be looking out for your next update.
Michelle... |
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The King's Vineyard (R)
by MaryA.
Chapters [50]
Reviews [ 77] Warnings [Some mature sexual situations/later chapters]
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Wed Oct 06, 2004 12:51 pm
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Poor Uncle Dwain  And to think that Cella could have been killed if she had not been gotten drunk and went to sleep in Thranduil's bed. Wow, what a close call! But where is Thranduil, now? What did that dream signify? Did the King call to her in her mind, or was her really there with her? She said that she had not called out to him, so does that mean that he was in the room with her...without her knowledge? Hmm, very interesting 
Another thing...how did the fire start? Was it set on purpose, or was it an accident? Ohhhh...I need answers!
Fantastic update, keep up the good work 
Michelle... |
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From Darkness to Light (R)
by Kendra.
Chapters [18]
Reviews [ 43] Warnings [Sexual Content]
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Wed Oct 06, 2004 12:32 pm
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Aww, how sweet it is! They actually have the approval of Miran's father. Although, I doubt that it would have mattered to Miran whether they had it or not Judging from her display of "eagerness" at Legolas's arrival, she would probably do just about anything to be with the one she loves. Oh, and what was up with Eomer and his "curt nod?" Does he disapprove of their relationship?
Their reunion was so sweet... ***sighs*** Update soon
Michelle... |
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The King's Vineyard (R)
by MaryA.
Chapters [50]
Reviews [ 77] Warnings [Some mature sexual situations/later chapters]
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Fri Oct 01, 2004 10:09 pm
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Grrrrr...you and these cliffhangers!!! I can't believe Cella's sudden boldness...might it be an affect of too much wine?? Ohhhh...will she remember what has happened, when she wakes up?? Or will Cella get what she is seeking?  And, what did the king mean when he told her "not here, not like this?" Ooooooo...the possibilities!
Keep updating!
Michelle... |
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