Reviews by Rous

Shattered Twilight · Mon Mar 22, 2010 8:17 am

While not versed in the Silmarillion, I was taken away by this write. Very well done.

Thank you for sharing.

rous

The Witch-King's Fury · Sun Mar 21, 2010 9:24 pm

Trying to read this was very tedious. Unless you reformat it, I doubt anyone else will read it. I would suggest a beta.

Countdown · Fri Mar 05, 2010 7:05 am

Could use some editing. I suggest finding a beta to help with the grammar issues.

Sounds of Spring · Wed Mar 03, 2010 1:20 am

This is quite delightful. Children and pets seem to make wonderful stories.

Thank you for sharing.

rous

So it begins · Sat Feb 27, 2010 8:12 am

Nicely done. Complete and succinct.

Thank you for sharing.

rous

At The Havens · Wed Feb 17, 2010 1:00 am

Nicely done. Great language and done in a worthy manner. I am not much of a Legolas fan, but I do like this; mostly because it is not sappy and does not actually set aside cannon as so many do.

Thank you for sharing.

rous

Of Fire and Passion · Sat Feb 13, 2010 8:08 am

Nicely done! I wish there was more. Much better than some of the blatant PWP that I have read.
Thank you for sharing.

rous

First Winter · Thu Feb 04, 2010 6:43 am

A nice little glimpse. The tone is very aprops po. There are a couple of word and punctuation issues, but they detract little from the story.

Thank you for sharing.

rous

Kissing is Different · Fri Jan 22, 2010 1:05 am

Nicely done; a very pleasurable glimpse into an intimate moment.

Thank you for sharing.

rous

Certain Advantages · Wed Jan 13, 2010 12:19 am

A nice little glimpse into an otherwise simple-seeming Hobbit.

Thank you for sharing.

rous

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