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Bitter (PG-13)
by vladazhael.
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Mon Nov 27, 2006 7:16 am
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Just goes to show to what ends a child will go to for their parents. I would say that his father was a bit obsessed. Great parallel to today's society. (Or societies of any era, for that matter.)
Thank you for sharing. |
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Needling pride (G)
by Rhapsody.
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Mon Nov 20, 2006 9:08 pm
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Well, you had more courage than did I. No matter how I racked my brain, I could not come up with anything to fit this. Well done.
Thank you for sharing. |
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A Moment Stolen (R)
by Rous.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 8] Warnings [Not too smutty, but just in case...]
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Thu Nov 16, 2006 8:11 pm
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Well, at this point, I think they only have two, and one is adopted. So, they have a lot of practicing to do. And, with both of them working and trying to raise kids, you know how finding time can be.
Thank you for reviewing. I was beginning to think this was really bad. I know it is not smutty enough, but I did not think it was really that heinous. |
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Making Reparations (R)
by ellie.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 7] Warnings [suggestive situation]
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Wed Nov 15, 2006 6:19 am
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Not bad for a first time. My first one sucked, big time. Nice ending, too.
Thank you for sharing. |
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Business and Pleasure (R)
by vladazhael.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 10] Warnings [Adult situations]
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Wed Nov 15, 2006 6:16 am
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Very nice. Just enough to tease, but nothing blatant. Subtlety is a virtue. LOL
Thank you for sharing. |
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Until fate reigns (G)
by Rhapsody.
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Wed Nov 08, 2006 8:39 pm
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| I guess brothers never grow out of teasing each other. Very nicely done. Thank you for sharing. |
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Joy Like Swords (PG)
by NancyBrooke.
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Wed Nov 08, 2006 8:37 pm
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Oh, nicely done. I like that he struggles to hear the right sounds that will inspire him. Thus, clamor becomes harmony.
Thank you for sharing. |
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Born of Love (PG)
by Seriiyah.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 3] Warnings [Death, agngst]
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Wed Nov 08, 2006 6:25 am
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A wonderful story. And, well presented. There are a few errors, though. This sounds like you use ESL. The errors are more in like with someone not using English primarily. However, the spirit of the story manages to shine through.
I mourn your loss. I have never experienced quite this kind of pain, but know enough of loss that I can sympathize.
Thank you for sharing. |
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Lessons Taught (G)
by Rous.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 7] Warnings [Tissues]
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Wed Nov 08, 2006 6:15 am
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Okay, I agree that it should go in the LOTR book section, but when I tried to change the category, it gave no way to do so; so, I am stuck here. Next time I will think it through before hand. I just have found that erring on the side of caution works best. 
Thank you for the comments. I do appreciate them. |
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Lessons Taught (G)
by Rous.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 7] Warnings [Tissues]
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Mon Nov 06, 2006 8:24 pm
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I was not really sure where to place it. It really does not fall into the trilogy, but the Silm was a bit dated. If you think it should go elsewhere, let me know. I wish we had a category for somewhere between the two.
Either way, thank you for reading and commenting. I see it did make the challenge. I have had some problems with that. |
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