Reviews by Duchess

The Yellow Bird · Sun May 02, 2004 12:59 pm

LOL Cute ending with Haldir and Du- I can't spell her name to save my life. *vbg* Can't see those two getting married anytime soon, but whoa, what a fiery courtship they're gonna have! *snickering*

This one could do with an epilogue, I'm thinking. Like showing how Rumil and Mer- (however you spell her name too) settle their little misunderstanding and perhaps a wedding or two?. Loved it, very sweet, adorable imagery throughout, especially in dealing with Em- (ditto on the spelling isue) and Orophin. Very Happy smiley face

Well cone! Smile smiley face

And Anya Makes Three · Sun May 02, 2004 12:15 pm

97 hits and no reviews? I hope people are sending you PMs to review then.

Again, this should definitely be NC17 and nothing else. Such graphic descriptions of oral sex warrant that rating, sweetie. Smile smiley face

And again, I really enjoyed reading this story, not necessarily agreeing with the whole threesome idea, but the story is still good. How you completely gloss over the whole, she's in an EVIL line of work, but the twins still love her and Elrond still accepts her presence kinda cracked me up.

Good job and I look forward to a possible epilogue to the story if you feel like writing it someday, one that deals with how she finally passes on, perhaps? *g*

Crooked Heart · Fri Apr 30, 2004 2:43 pm

Whoa! this wasn't marked as NC17 but it should be. *fanning myself now* Wow!

I liked it, a lot. You really captured Faith's character, bigtime. Well done! Smile smiley face

Else Than Swords Can Be Unbroken · Fri Apr 30, 2004 2:00 pm

Are you going to have Eowyn and Aragorn cheat on their spouses? I can see Eowyn doing so, the way you've written her, but Aragorn...that's a different story.

You've got me curious now, so I'll ask for more to see where you take this one. Smile smiley face

Only Time · Fri Apr 30, 2004 1:30 pm

Oh no, what an awkward way to meet a guy and then the misunderstanding Legolas obvioulsy got from what little he saw...Oh dear! Please come back and write more soon? This is very intriguing! *vbg*

Spiders · Fri Apr 30, 2004 12:14 pm

LOL Too funny! I love it. *still snickering*

Okay, NOW Panic! · Thu Apr 29, 2004 3:42 pm

*just having read Anna's feedback* I can imagine Lindir kissing Penny, the rogue, but not any other Elf I think. LOL

GREAT sequel you've got going here! I'm misbehaving and using both hands to type, even though the doctor says that's a no no (pulled a tendon in my right hand) because I HAVE to tell you just what I loved about this story so far. *g*

You made me cry my eyes out over Halbarad's death and I just thought that the way you did it, having him concerned for Penny AND the mention of his late wife were soooo touching. It was the comment about his sons' mother that really set off the waterworks. I'd managed to contain them until that point,but that tipped the scales in favor of tears. *sniffling again at the thought of it*
The fact Halbarad made his son promise to look after Penny like that is entirely fitting with that character and I'm soooo glad you put that in there. I really look forward to their meeting and Penny's reaction to it. I hope for the son's sake that he knows how to be diplomatic in how he words things and doesn't make Penny mad. She'd snap his his off before he knew what hit him. lol

The idea to decorate a vase for Arwen as her wedding gift was sweet and I adore the fact there's a line of poetry on it too. Lovely!

Glad you took someone else's suggestion and gave the woman a better dress for the wedding. *vbg* I'm soooo glad we're going to see her travel and meet many more well known figures in Middle Earth! Please do write more soon? I love this! *happy sigh*

The Journey · Mon Apr 26, 2004 5:26 am

Now who the heck is that? No bad guys allowed! This person had better not try to hurt anybody. How come no one saw or heard him? Is this another Elf? If so, where from? Too much mystery, I want answers! Wink smiley face

Eventually and in your own good time, of course. *vbg*

Thank you for the update and I hope you have a great day. Smile smiley face

Deeper Than Skin · Fri Apr 23, 2004 2:14 pm

I find this story to be very interesting and look forward to more of it, hopefully soon. *g*

Why is Mithion looking into the strengths and weaknesses of Mirkwood? Is he spying for Sauron, has the Dark Lord founded Dol Guldur already?

What is up with the way he keeps encountering Legolas? Considering how he keeps vanishing, I'd say these run ins are deliberate, so what's he planning? Don't let him hurt Legolas! Please?

You will post more soon, won't you? *hoping so*

Haldir's Fall · Fri Apr 23, 2004 8:49 am

Haldir! *sniffle* Oh how I hated that he died! Great imagery you painted for us.

Please do continue this fic, I'd love to see who you have as Haldir's love.

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