Reviews for "The Yellow Bird"

Sun Apr 18, 2004 8:09 am

It's so sweet! I loved it! Will you keep writing as to what happens, or is that all? Anyway, it's a wonderful story! I love how you describe things... it's magical! Very Happy smiley face

Sun May 02, 2004 12:59 pm

LOL Cute ending with Haldir and Du- I can't spell her name to save my life. *vbg* Can't see those two getting married anytime soon, but whoa, what a fiery courtship they're gonna have! *snickering*

This one could do with an epilogue, I'm thinking. Like showing how Rumil and Mer- (however you spell her name too) settle their little misunderstanding and perhaps a wedding or two?. Loved it, very sweet, adorable imagery throughout, especially in dealing with Em- (ditto on the spelling isue) and Orophin. Very Happy smiley face

Well cone! Smile smiley face

Sun Jun 13, 2004 6:35 pm

I am such a romantic. This was just so sweet. I would love to see the different couples' courtships.

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