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AzureDragoness

Joined: 11 Jan 2004
Reviews: 183
Location: Greater Metropolitan Area of the District of Columbia
Tue Jun 08, 2004 12:05 pm
*reading* Yes.... yes.... yes????? *falls out of her chair* Wait, it can't end there!!! Nuuuuu, I wanna know who's talking Bawl smiley face Pleeeeeeeeease update Soon smiley face
 
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SilentTears
Joined: 24 Jul 2003
Reviews: 23
Location: Mirkwood
Wed Jun 09, 2004 4:43 pm
Do you have a beta? Because if you need one i'd gladly help you out. I know a few elvish phrases and i could help you. anyway i actually enjoyed this story. There were a few parts that were a little confusing but overall i like it. Finally a story where Haldir isn't acting like an ass.
 
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redlexus01
Joined: 05 Apr 2004
Reviews: 22
Location: Alabama
Wed Jun 09, 2004 10:34 pm
I would appreciate any help. Can someone tell me what a beta is?
 
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AzureDragoness

Joined: 11 Jan 2004
Reviews: 183
Location: Greater Metropolitan Area of the District of Columbia
Thu Jun 10, 2004 2:51 pm
Beta is the person who helps you by checking your work before you post. Oh, and I don't get it.... if they didn't understand him, why were they answering his questions? *confuzzled look* Anyways, please, more soon!
(May the squad of bunnies spur your creative juices)
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aragorndreamer
Joined: 21 Apr 2004
Reviews: 24
Location: 
Fri Jun 18, 2004 5:58 am
I am liking this story. Can't wait for an up date. Please post one soon.
 
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aragorndreamer
Joined: 21 Apr 2004
Reviews: 24
Location: 
Thu Jun 24, 2004 6:29 am
I was glad to see the update. I check every day to see if you wrote more. I am liking the direction you are going in and look forwards to a new chapter.
 
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Duchess

Joined: 25 Mar 2004
Reviews: 187
Location: North Carolina
Tue Jun 29, 2004 9:23 am
An interesting story. I look forward to seeing what you do with it because I ADORE those three brothers, especially Haldir. *vbg*

I wonder what the explanation of Cecilia being an Elf will be? *curious*
 
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AranelMinyatur
Joined: 21 Apr 2004
Reviews: 46
Location: Western Washington State
Fri Jul 02, 2004 1:25 pm
Great story! Another one to add to the list to watch! Very Happy smiley face Can't wait for the update!!
 
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AranelMinyatur
Joined: 21 Apr 2004
Reviews: 46
Location: Western Washington State
Mon Jul 05, 2004 1:48 am
Hmmmmm...the plot thickens! I'm so curious to see what great things Cecilia does!!! Bounce smiley face I'll be checking my email constantly!
 
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Duchess

Joined: 25 Mar 2004
Reviews: 187
Location: North Carolina
Mon Jul 05, 2004 2:00 am
I'm curious about the contradiction you have going on. Did you not intend to continue with the idea that the girls knew about LotR and it's characters? Because now you have them, or Cecilia at least, acting like she knows nothing about it. *puzzled*

In any case, if I ignore that completely this is an enjoyable little tale and I look forward to seeing more updates. Smile smiley face
 
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