Reviews for "New Beginnings"

Fri Jul 30, 2004 3:29 pm

I must say that the story has the making to be something good, but the switch from them knowing LOTR to not knowing LOTR is going to be hard to read. I don't mind a character that doesn't know LOTR falling into ME. As a fan I would think that everyone should know, but I know they don't. Even people that has seen the movies but not read the books wouldn't know all there was to know about the stories. If you can go back and twick the story to fit them not knowing that much about the stories it would make thing easier to read.

Good luck and I really look forward to more updates! Very Happy smiley face

Tue Aug 03, 2004 10:17 am

Okay. Thanks for clearing that up. Smile smiley face

does this mean you're gonna go back and rewrite the beginning eventually?

Fri Sep 17, 2004 9:08 pm

I am new to this site, and hope that I do not offend anyone with this review.

I really like the premise of the story; how they seemed to time warp into ME through the fog, but feel that the story is a little rushed. The romance between Cecelia and Haldir seems a little skewed timewise - too rushed. Otherwise, I do like the story and plan on putting it on my story watch list.

Keep up the good work!! Smile smiley face

Tue Oct 05, 2004 6:25 pm

So........when is the next Chapter coming our way????

I can't wait, im dying to find out what happens!

PLEASEEEEE!!!!!!! write more soon!

Very Happy smiley face

Tue Oct 19, 2004 6:48 pm

Have you given up on this story? Crying or Very sad smiley face

Please come back and finish.

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