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Julie
Joined: 02 Feb 2004
Reviews: 23
Location: Texas
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Fri Jul 02, 2004 11:53 am
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What a delight to wake up and find this waiting for me. I read it while I had my breakfast, and I just loved it. Such compelling details too. This story plays like a movie in my mind when I read, so strongly visual and gripping in intensity. I thoroughly enjoyed everything about this new chapter. And again, I want to say what an exciting way to open a story this is. Personally, I have no problem with one of the twins hating mortals. It never bothers me if people want to take a non-canon route on these things; after all this is fiction and we are only playing. I am sure you have an excellent reason planned to explain this detail, and I trust you to take your readers on an interesting ride with this story. I can't wait to read more!  |
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
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Fri Jul 02, 2004 2:49 pm
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Intriguing! Buried twice? Amazing! But why was she there? A great new chapter - the part with the apology was bittersweet. I love the way you give such vivid personalities to the characters! Please, please update  !!!! |
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Riyallyn
Joined: 21 Jan 2004
Reviews: 5
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Tue Jul 06, 2004 12:11 pm
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And then he knew death. Yay! I'm so morbid.
And yes, why? why? and why? I'm very curious as to why she would live with the humans in three incarnations and not tell anyone who she is. Granted, with the bigotry of some, I can understand that. There are just so many directons you can go. I'm very much looking forward to the next piece of the puzzle you give us. I hope it's not too long a wait! |
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Fianna
Joined: 03 Feb 2004
Reviews: 10
Location: Michigan
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Sun Aug 29, 2004 9:57 am
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Vi, I hope you get this when you are well and able to continue, my heart is with you dear. Chapter four, exceptional. The ending of chapter three for me of course was perfect, leave it one who holds the most caution, Haldir, in his usual perceptive way to finish the human, in the only way that would be acceptable. Injury to him would only fuel the man's anger and hate, leaving him apt to doworse to Mislyn or any elf that crossed his path. To protect not only the elleth, Haldir had to make that final decision, cooly and without emotion. His skill is exceptional.
Chapter four, therein, starts off as it should, with the others ready to follow Haldir's quicker response, and sheathing weapons drawn too late. Hehehe.. go Haldir... .. and their efforts to help Mislyn are so warming. The teasing, and thoughts the four pass to each other are both humorous and intriguing, mystery as to why Elladan has so much anger I am sure will be explained later. I like the differences between the twins, as well as Legolas, and Haldir as well.
It is good to see Crelain become such a strong man, and heartrending as well to see his distress in knowing Mislyn will not return. Haldir's gift of his armband, to reassure the human that he would return was priceless, a token of deep sympathy most would not see in Haldir.
Excellent writing, Vi. I am slow in finding time to keep up, but I look forward to each chapter. You inspire me with your strength and love for the elves. I can only hope I can inspire such love with my own writings. Well done and take care. |
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Anie
Joined: 30 Sep 2004
Reviews: 47
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Thu Oct 21, 2004 1:05 pm
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Whens Chapter 5 coming??? Oh i can't wait........i want to read on! It wonderfully written. Im looking forward to the next part.
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Julie
Joined: 02 Feb 2004
Reviews: 23
Location: Texas
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Sun Nov 21, 2004 5:17 pm
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I do apologize for taking so long to read and review. I never for a moment forgot that this chapter was waiting for me like a chocolate bar in a drawer left to tease me. *g* And today I finally got a chance to read it and oooooh what a yummy treat!!
This chapter is beautifully written. I love the way you portray all the elves, each with his or her distinct yet honorable character. Everything you wrote made sense, and the story flows beautifully. The dialogue is flawless, the descriptions highly visual, and the plot followed logic. I also loved Crelaine's sensitivity as well as the complexity you gave to each of the other characters.
I look forward to the next chapter. Thanks so much for writing this lovely story. |
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Talasi
Joined: 29 Mar 2004
Reviews: 116
Location: Haldir\'s Lap
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Wed Nov 24, 2004 6:39 pm
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Vi,
This is truly wonderful! She is definitely full of secrets. I'm glad the peacekeepers came along to discover what had taken place. That Janap got what he deserved. I like your writing style and the banter between them. I agree with Julie on every point.
Please, please, please update this story!!!!
Talasi |
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kwannom
Joined: 08 Jan 2004
Reviews: 67
Location: Brazil
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Fri May 20, 2005 11:05 pm
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| Please, don't be like me and update this story! Please please PLEASE please!!! |
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Fyalee
Joined: 15 May 2005
Reviews: 16
Location: South of Legolas, North of Haldir and all around Éomer.
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Tue Jun 14, 2005 1:03 pm
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It's a shame you have not updated in a while... I was really enjoying the beginning chapters. I hope that all is well and you can continue this amazing story, as I am really intrigued to see where it leads.
Here's hoping... |
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Shanalir
Joined: 27 Feb 2005
Reviews: 183
Location: Umm, anyone seen my map?
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Tue Jun 21, 2005 10:00 am
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| I just ran accross this and love it. I love what you have down so far. Please update soon. This is a wonderful story. |
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