Reviews for "Eternal"

Thu Aug 31, 2006 4:57 pm

Wow, this is simply amazing. I had a hard time to put this story down and just when you thought: now they will tell each other how they feel, something else happens. Sometimes I thought: let’s lock these two up in a room for a while. But it was worth the wait.

What a great story girl! The torment and pain you put your characters through is so tangible and when they finally get there and see the sun and the moon for the first time… that is such a magical moment! What I also found extremely well written is the way you showed us how the Golondrim culture – a very special one – came into being. This whole story feels like a testimony to Tolkien’s creation on how the exiles found their home in Nevrast, and later on in Gondolin. And now Maeglin, poor Maeglin without a father or a mother… but he has Ecthelion to look after him. Oh, I feel so so sorry for him. So yeah, I am really hoping that a new chapter will follow soon and I am also looking forward to the story of Ecthelion & Aredhel that you have planned. Great writing Trekqueen!

Please update Soon smiley face

Sun Sep 10, 2006 1:55 am

A great beginning to what I think looks like a great story...but alas...it looks VERY long...I best get reading then!
NiRi

Sun Sep 10, 2006 2:04 am

Very good! I am really enjoying this story! I haven't read any Silm fics before but this is very very interesting!
NiRi

Sun Sep 10, 2006 3:32 am

Just caught up to chap 7, and I'm still loving it. Very Happy smiley face

Sun Oct 22, 2006 1:19 pm

And they are gone, just as quick as they came through the mists. I do feel for Maeglin though, it is if nobody, well except for Ecthelion who cares about this grief. I shook my head when Idril said this:

“Do not think that this world is made to service your whims and joys. We all have our own lives to tend to with loves and grievances.”

As if the world for Maeglin is such a happy place. It feels to me as if he tries to cling on what is his family right now, but all they do is pushing him away. Poor elf.

But oh, the oath will come at great cost for the house of Hurin... A great chapter Trekqueen! Where is the next one? Wink smiley face

Tue Apr 10, 2007 7:31 pm

You know, I was just wondering about this story the other day. Seeing this update made my day. It was well worth the wait. I can't wait to see how all of this comes to it's inevitable conclusion. And I'm looking forward to the sequels/off-shoots.

Wed Apr 11, 2007 2:22 am

Thank you so much for finally updating. This is a truly amazing story, and a pleasure to read. I cannot wait to see the next chapter! Please keep up the excellent work!

Fri Apr 20, 2007 12:36 pm

Ah politics, schemes, love, intrigue, lust.... but what is Turgon really thinking? I told you before, it just seems like he lets his lords discuss what he already decided in a very clever way. I love the ending, gods Trek, that was so powerful. I just got the fuzzies when Glorfindel and Elrilya talked about kids. I just felt that I wanted to burst in and hug both. This is just great writing and superb storytelling!

Wed Nov 28, 2007 2:46 am

I've read this chapter about 3 times now, haha. Just wow! It was so worth the very long wait. The attention to details just sets this chapter apart. From the quiet between Glorfindel and Elrilya to the chaos of the battlefield..and that scene. I always got mad at that scene and you captured it, and the rest and made it your own ^_^
Aweshum.

Thu Jan 17, 2008 8:42 pm

I am completely in love with your story! It was and is bloody brilliant. Glorfindel's character is masterful and Elrilya has developed into an elleth worth admiration. The last chapter that you have posted (which I dearly hope is not the end of this lovely tale) was...well it was amazing. You are a brilliant writer and I- again- adore this story and all the twists and turns there in.

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