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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003
Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
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Fri Oct 15, 2004 8:43 pm
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| Was hooked since I downloaded it and read it. Good job sis =) can't wait till yer finish it. |
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Mija
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 16
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Tue Oct 26, 2004 1:12 am
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| Wha-hooooo You updated. It's been so long. ANother great chapter!! |
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DarkElfChilde
Joined: 23 Aug 2004
Reviews: 29
Location: I'm located somewhere
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Mon Nov 08, 2004 11:47 pm
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Well done, please continue your story. ^_^
- DEC |
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RunnerBeast
Joined: 01 May 2004
Reviews: 19
Location: WA
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Tue Nov 09, 2004 1:24 pm
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I'm totally loving your story. I started reading it and stayed glued all the way through. Now I've been longing for the last two beautiful up dates. Yay! Finally I leave a much deserved review. This is a cruel cliff hanger, but I guess I'll live... Kaitlyn did.  You are a great writer. Lucky me for finding YOU! |
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nelygirl
Joined: 04 Oct 2004
Reviews: 5
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Tue Nov 09, 2004 4:42 pm
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| OMG! That is such a torurousliy cruel cliffhanger, but I can wait!!! Wow, u are one of the very few authors whose stories i am never disappointed with, take care and keep those amazing chapters coming!!!! |
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Vendie
Joined: 01 May 2004
Reviews: 59
Location: Iowa, USA
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Wed Nov 10, 2004 1:04 am
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ARG! You're horrible! Horrible, horrible, horrible!
...not really, that's just my automatic response to a cliffhanger.  This chapter was great - I can't wait to read more. The song was amazing - especially since it was written in Elvish. I wish I knew what it sounded like....the music major in me wants to try and compose a little melody for it, but I fear it would not do justice to the wonderful lyrics.
Keep it up! I really love this story and hope to see more sometime in the near future |
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archerlove
Joined: 09 Nov 2004
Reviews: 2
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Wed Nov 10, 2004 9:12 am
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Please please update again soon! I found your story and could not stop until reading it all the way thru - you have developed these characters and their relationship so beautifully - every interaction between them makes my heart pound and makes me hold me breath....I give you my highest compliments and can't wait to read more!
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 269
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Wed Nov 10, 2004 11:05 am
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Gahhhh!!! Why, oh why do you like torturing us?
I loved the scene where Gimli and Legolas were on their horse, on their way back to Edoras. That scene was so great! I loved the contrast of anxiety and humor between Legolas and Gimli. Fantastic!
And the song that Legolas was singing...it was so beautiful and so sad. I felt so sorry for Legolas.
Wonderful chapter! I can't wait to read the next chapter. 
Update soon,
Michelle.... |
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draegon
Joined: 01 Jul 2004
Reviews: 41
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Thu Nov 11, 2004 12:02 am
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| I'm so happy that Kaitlyn is better!!!!! I was so worried for Legolas because he was beside himself. I hope he gets the chance to tell her how he feels soon. I'm curious to know if Kaitlyn has realized she's in love with Legolas yet. They really haven't had the chance to be truly alone yet, so I hope the chance arises while they are in Edoras. |
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eressa
Joined: 01 Apr 2004
Reviews: 12
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Sat Dec 04, 2004 4:46 am
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| i have read your story for a few chapter, firstly you follow the movie conversations to well....its just that having heard it in the film its a bit to obvious and feels really fake to have another character with them. Also your character is a typical Mary-Sue........loads of readers enjoy that sort of character so its not a critism...its just thats what she is. I like your legolas...he speaks the same way that i'd imagine....but still your story is alright....but seems like its been written by a high school student. Are you a teenager? |
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