Reviews for ""Mysterious Fate""

Wed Dec 08, 2004 12:21 am

wow a month seems like so long but then again its worth the wait, i cannot believe legolas was so close yet so far from telling kaitlyn how he felt, my own heart was racing in anticipation , but what really makes this a great story and chapter is the waiting, i'm glad the story has a nice pace to it ...even if it leaves me practically drooling for more..keep the great work up..this is one dedicated and appreciative fan that won't let ya down!!

Wed Dec 08, 2004 6:59 am

eressa said
> but still your story is alright....but seems like its been written by a high school student. Are you a teenager?

You have got to be kidding me.... This is a great story, and don't let badly spelled reviews discourage you. And while some may consider this a MarySue (and that all depends, of course, on your definition), your character at least has depth and flaws (which are two things that MarySues do not have, by *my* definition).

I'm so glad you updated again. I was just rereading my favorite parts of the story yesterday (I love it when they listen to the CD player and when she touches his ears Wink smiley face

). But the agony of waiting! I know there is more to life than fanfiction, and I can handle one chapter a month, but when so little happens in each chapter... I need some action! Broccoli smiley face

But I like it too. After all, once they get it on, it's difficult to keep the story interesting (hey, I'm only saying what we all think occasionally). But I'd like to see some more kissing or perhaps a dream sequence to move things along. Very Happy smiley face

Wed Dec 08, 2004 6:09 pm

Oh, wow! That was great, Cormak. Well worth the wait. Smile smiley face

I love the way that Kaitlyn is trying to rationalize Legolas's behavior...you know, like he's probably only concerned because she's his "friend." Hmm, if only she knew!

I was on the edge of my seat, throughout this entire chapter! I just KNEW that he was going to tell her how he felt...but I guess we'll just have to wait for that, huh? That's okay...anticipation, in this case, is a good thing Very Happy smiley face

Absolutely fantastic chapter! I'll be eagerly awaiting your next update...

In the meantime, I think I'll go and check out that video Wink smiley face

Happy holidays!

Michelle...

Wed Dec 08, 2004 8:39 pm

I was on the edge of my seat when I thought that he was gonna tell her how he felt and then - bam- the hobbits come - never before had I been so mad at the hobbits. lol. Head bang smiley face

I checked out that video and I was impressed, it's obvious that you really care about this story and it shows when you write.

I liked the part where he was hoping that she'd touch his ear and at the same time, hoped that she wouldn't - it was great.

I can't wait for the next chapter - update soon!
You rock smiley face

Wed Dec 08, 2004 11:42 pm

Well now, Kaitlyn is finally starting to notice Legolas' feelings, although she's still in denial. I hope she doesn't deny it too much longer. I have the feeling that Legolas will tell her of his feelings very soon. I hope she also realizes very soon that she does in fact love him. I'm guessing she has it in her head that they can't be because of the Fellowship. I think she needs a good long talk with Gandalf about this. Or Aragorn. They always gave her the best advice.

Thu Dec 09, 2004 6:37 pm

This is a wonderful story!!! I love it so much!!! But Kaitlyn is always crying and it gets a little annoying. But it is such a wonderful story!!! Thank you so much!!!

Sat Dec 18, 2004 9:02 pm

This story is really good. I am looking forward to the next chapter. I hope Legolas gets to finish his talk with Kaitlyn. Smile smiley face

Thu Dec 30, 2004 2:13 pm

Gah! You are evil and should be punished! (not really Laughing smiley face

) You're right, we must focus on the fact that they're finally kissing - and BOY what a kiss! Now, if you'll excuse me, I must go splash some cold water on my face...

Fri Dec 31, 2004 12:51 am

OMG, they finally kissed!!!!!! I was sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for this to happen, and I'm not disappointed!!!! I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope Kaitlyn doesn't deny her feelings for Legolas anymore. And I hope they don't take things too far. Seems just a tad bit early for that. Of course, who knows, if Kaitlyn keeps rubbing Legolas' ear like she is.

Fri Dec 31, 2004 5:54 am

Hi
This is one of the most wonderful 10th walker story I have ever read
Keep up the good work and update soon because I can't wait for the next chapter

Thank you

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