Reviews for ""Mysterious Fate""

Wed Jan 05, 2005 12:58 am

*sigh* Yet another wonderful chapter that decidedly did not last long enough! Your ability to describe exactly what's going on is amazing. I love it.
There were a couple of technical errors, however. The plural form of Palantir is Palantiri, and it is more appealing to the eye when you write out a number instead of using the number itself (ten as opposed to 10.).
Other than that, this last chapter is wonderful. As I said, you have a knack for describing scenery wonderfully and you totally have me hooked. I can't wait for the next chapter, as always. Great job!

Mon Jan 10, 2005 12:20 pm

Fantastic chapter! I really love the relationship between Kaitlyn and Legolas. Legolas's dedication, loyalty, and love for Kaitlyn, is so endearing. How could she *not* fall in love with him?

I loved the scene where Kaitlyn thought that he was dead! That was hilarious...but I did feel a little sorry for her - I'm sure that his sleeping habits will take some getting use to. *HOPEFULLY* she'll have the opportunity to get use to it. Very Happy smiley face

You are truly evil to leave the chapter where you did! I scrolled down the page, expecting more of the scene, and all I found was your A/N! LOL! I'm really anxious for your next update! I can't wait to see how this scene will unfold!

Marvelous job, Cormak! Keep up the good work!

Michelle...

Sun Jan 16, 2005 10:40 pm

I agree. Anything physical between Legolas and Kaitlyn at this stage would be wrong. She needs to still heal from her heartbreak with Derrick. She knows Legolas won't hurt her, but she still has that fear with her. I hope that they don't try to avoid each other after this, because I don't think that would help things any. She still needs him with her, since she does care for him. Legolas needs to show Kaitlyn that she doesn't have to fear loving him in return.

Tue Jan 18, 2005 3:40 am

Cormak, you never dissappoint me! I really loved this chapter. I think it was far better to have things go the way they did, rather that the other way Wink smiley face

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Well it is very comforting to hear you say that they are not on that level YET... because that means that they will actually get somewhere with their relationship. Smile smiley face

You are such an angst queen that for a moment I thought: that was it and now they are never going to seee ach other again. The author´s note gave me (and them) hope.

Do not worry about updating "only" once a month. That is not a long wait at all! I could wait a lot longer... this is such a good fic.

Ilmatar

Thu Jan 20, 2005 4:36 pm

I started reading this story last night and didn't get to bed until dawn. I really, really love it. Legolas is my favorite character in LoTR, and I love when he gets a prime role in fan fics.

Please, please, please update. I'm in agony with not knowing what happens next!

Sun Feb 13, 2005 11:05 pm

If I never mentioned this before, then I will now. I absolutely love how you developed the relationship between Kaitlyn and Aragorn. For all intents and purposes, he is her older brother. He acts just like a brother would. It's obvious that Kaitlyn appreciates that, because she needs guidance. And Aragorn is definitely someone she will listen to.And Gandalf I've noticed is similar to a father figure for her. Eowyn is becoming a sister figure, if she's not already. I think she needs to talk to Legolas as soon as she's ready. But the way you're developing Kaitlyns' relationships to those around her are astounding. I don't mind waiting a month for a chapter, because I know that no matter what, you will update. And it's worth taking the time, when all of your chapters are this wonderful.

Sun Feb 13, 2005 11:10 pm

I love this story! It's good that Aragorn finally told her some stuff about elves. YaY! Very Happy smiley face

I love this story! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Mon Feb 14, 2005 11:23 am

*tears out hair in frustration* Head bang smiley face

This woman thinks TOO MUCH! Someone needs to bonk her on the head.

Mon Feb 14, 2005 7:36 pm

OHHHHHHHHHHHMAN I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i check everyday for a new chapter sweetie I know ur prolly busy but don't take so long sometimes it is just wrong to keep peeps waiting so long you know what i mean

Sun Feb 20, 2005 1:31 am

The pace of this story is absolutley perfect...in my opinion Very Happy smiley face

I would have been somewhat disappointed if Legolas and Kaitlyn had instantly professed their undying love for one another. While I'm pretty sure that they love each other very much, the consequences of love between and elf and a mortal, should be explored. I love the way you've developed the relationships in Kaitlyn's life. Aragorn has become such an important figure in her life...I hope that she takes his advice to heart - especially since he speaks from experience.

Lovely chapter, Cormak...as usual! I can't wait to read more Smile smiley face

Michelle...

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