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Dulcinea
Joined: 25 Nov 2006
Reviews: 64
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Wed Dec 06, 2006 8:58 pm
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Cormak! I love your story. It is my favorite of all. Please, please, please continue it  |
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Athanya
Joined: 17 Nov 2004
Reviews: 15
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Sat Dec 16, 2006 10:16 pm
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astareal23
Joined: 05 Jan 2007
Reviews: 3
Location: Chicago
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Fri Jan 05, 2007 12:38 am
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sweet god.
so someone printed out your stories and more or less tied me down and forced me to read them (i used to hate fan fiction) but...
sweet god.
this was the best freggen story i ever have read.
dont stop.
or i will find you and kill you.
after i make you finish the story.
kudos my friend, kudos. |
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felis1215
Joined: 14 Oct 2004
Reviews: 119
Location: Baton Rouge, Louisiana
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Thu Feb 15, 2007 5:18 pm
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| Please please please don't leave this as it is!!! Please finish it! I really lovethe story and want to read the rest of it... |
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Aeode
Joined: 18 Apr 2007
Reviews: 52
Location: Solemn Sea
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Tue Apr 24, 2007 3:07 am
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| This was excellent and I hope that sometime the story is completed! |
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cookienut
Joined: 13 Apr 2007
Reviews: 15
Location: Milky Way
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Sat Apr 28, 2007 10:34 am
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Hey, just wanted to point of that in Chapter 2, there's a bit of an oddity. Gimli comes across his dead kin in this chapter, but in the first chapter, it's as if it's already happened. It's a little confusing.
If it's unintentional, you might want to fix it.
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cookienut
Joined: 13 Apr 2007
Reviews: 15
Location: Milky Way
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Sat Apr 28, 2007 4:35 pm
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| This was pretty good. I hope you'll come back to it some day. |
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Squid
Joined: 31 May 2007
Reviews: 3
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Thu May 31, 2007 11:56 am
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Wow! This is one of the best fan-fics I have ever read. You have a great talent for writing. And a way to go for your beta - they did a great job editing.
The story flows very well, and the plot flows very nicely. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Suggestion (that you definitely don't have to take, but I'm such a romantic at heart and I hate the idea of one lover leaving the other), it would be so nice if either Kaitlyn somehow was given the gift of an elven life.
Keep up the great work and I can't wait until you update. |
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ladyisis
Joined: 03 Sep 2006
Reviews: 27
Location: UK
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Sun Jul 08, 2007 5:11 pm
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| This is an amazing story, you must have put so much heart (not to mention time!) into it. It would be such a shame for it to go unfinished. Hope to see it continued soon - the suspense is killing us! To stop for so long at so crutial a moment! xx |
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Elenna
Joined: 28 Dec 2006
Reviews: 5
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Tue Oct 02, 2007 5:10 am
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| Did I read somewhere that you're not continuing with this fic? I hope not, because I think it's great. It's such a well composed story, you've written Tolkien's characters & your own in such a believable & sympathetic way. It would be a real shame to leave such a wonderful story unfinished. Although I know real life & other interests can sometimes get in the way. I hope you'll continue with MF, long waits between updates would be worth the wait. I'm sure alot of other people think so too. Oops I've gone on quite a bit there! *note to self must not ramble!* Anyway I'll keep my fingers crossed! |
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