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TXFaramirFangirl
Joined: 27 Jun 2004 Reviews: 11
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Wed Jul 21, 2004 12:25 am
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| Huh . . .I am intrigued . . .I will await more. |
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kalia
Joined: 10 Jul 2004 Reviews: 4
Location: Switzerland
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Wed Jul 21, 2004 3:26 am
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Interesting but very confusing beginning. I will be sure to read the rest of your story to clear up my confusion about what is going on *smiles*
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sindohte

Joined: 14 May 2003 Reviews: 157
Location: Rubbing up against an Elf
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Wed Jul 21, 2004 6:34 am
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| I find that I have to agree with Kalia. The whole business with mixing the past and future together left me going "huh?" Hopefully you will quickly clear up the issue of whether Elrond is in the past or the present, because to drag out the suspense for too long might cause readers to lose interest or give up in confusion. |
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ViJanaway

Joined: 07 May 2004 Reviews: 78
Location: Near Dallas, Texas
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Wed Jul 21, 2004 1:11 pm
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| Not sure where you are headed with this. It is hard to know what is real and what may be illusion. |
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Mitharan
Joined: 22 Jul 2004 Reviews: 2
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Thu Jul 22, 2004 7:38 am
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| great, seriously mysterious.....i like the whole confusing aspect of this story and as it was the first story i read here i am impressed and hope to read more! |
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BellemaineChercoeur

Joined: 28 May 2003 Reviews: 106
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Sun Jul 25, 2004 1:52 am
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| Very mysterious, and also quite confusing as you switch between what I am assuming is reality and illusion. I feel for poor Elrond! You must continue and let us know what is happening! |
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ViJanaway

Joined: 07 May 2004 Reviews: 78
Location: Near Dallas, Texas
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Sat Jul 31, 2004 6:25 pm
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Elrond's care and love is so nicely portrayed.
I can only imagine what Elladan and Elrohir have in mind
Don't let it be too drastic.
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ellie
Joined: 30 Aug 2004 Reviews: 110
Location: Where I am now.
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Tue Sep 07, 2004 12:00 am
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| Keep the updates coming! Can't wait to find out what happens next! |
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Cakresvari
Joined: 04 May 2004 Reviews: 8
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Thu Nov 18, 2004 11:46 pm
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Don't stop now or I might have to hurt you. I know Nenya, she can get me your address.  |
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