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cassandra
Joined: 03 Aug 2004
Reviews: 17
Location: Hawaii
Sat Oct 16, 2004 1:50 pm

Fantastic fiction! Interested in seeing how this works out. Please update soon. Very Happy smiley face
 
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Cee
Joined: 23 Jul 2004
Reviews: 7
Location: Scampering with elves in my happy place.
Tue Oct 26, 2004 9:28 am

Okay first off sorry that it has been so long since we posted anything. Both my coauthor and myself have been terribly busy. We have the next chapter done it just needs some checking before we post. I'll try to do that this week.
 
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Tesseleve
Joined: 24 Jun 2004
Reviews: 73
Location: 
Thu Nov 04, 2004 6:03 pm

Smile smiley face this is turning out to be a very good story,
was wondering,how long are you going to leve us haning Wink smiley face
i love this so far.
next chapter OPEN Open open Exclamation smiley face Head bang smiley face
 
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ghettoelleth

Joined: 06 Nov 2004
Reviews: 378
Location: 
Mon Nov 08, 2004 12:29 am

Well...........I was gonna complain about your beta, (I'm on chapter 3 right now) but since you didn't have one.............

This is a really good story. A wonderful concept with great potential. I'm having a bit of a hard time getting into it with the problems but I will keep going as you have said the betaing (is that a word??) kicks in soon.
You two are very talented.
 
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kinvara
Joined: 18 Feb 2004
Reviews: 58
Location: middle of nowhere, dorset
Tue Dec 14, 2004 1:22 pm

Ahh please can you update soon, i have only just found this story, but i really really like it and i want to read more! The plot is very original, most others seem to have been time and time again. Anyway what i really want to know is when the next chapter is going to be posted and how long i'm going to have to wait?! Please don't give up on this fic!
 
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Talasi
Joined: 29 Mar 2004
Reviews: 116
Location: Haldir\'s Lap
Fri Jul 01, 2005 9:07 pm

I'm so glad you finally updated. I just hate it when a great story is left unfinished. I look forward to more.

Hugs,
Talasi
 
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kinvara
Joined: 18 Feb 2004
Reviews: 58
Location: middle of nowhere, dorset
Fri Aug 05, 2005 2:08 pm

sorry i have only just got time to reveiw your story. I think this has been a very good chapter to return on and i hope that another will be coming very soon, because as you have written it very well you have managed to had a rather a lot of suspense onto the end of this chappy and now i really want to know what is going to be the out come of this story. Smile smiley face
 
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Maria
Joined: 24 May 2005
Reviews: 161
Location: GREEN BAY,(PACKERS) WIS.
Wed Nov 05, 2008 11:24 pm

Hey I just found this story and I find quite interesting. Haldir and his companions trying to live in the desert? I thought it was funny that they could not bathe every day like they normally do. The had to opt with lotion instead. Poor Sabiya! She is in love with Haldir and fights her feelings as he does. Hey don't stop now with the writing. This is good and I would like to read more. Keep it coming.
 
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