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Alassante

Joined: 11 Dec 2004
Reviews: 459
Location: Hitchhiking to Rivendell
Thu Jun 23, 2005 6:12 pm

I'm baaaaackkkkkkkk!!

Whew! Shocked smiley face I just finished part 15 and I think I am in love with that stud. No wonder Legolas is so sexy - he gets it from his way too hot daddy. Smokin' smiley face

I am totally caught up in this story. I love your characterizations. Even bit characters have a richness to them that I enjoy, rather than just a name and a few spoken lines. The guard we never saw in the trees had a presence even!!!

Lindomiel is adorable. I told you that wench Marti would be back (course you already knew but still I just wanted to say I told you so Shocked smiley face ) I like the pacing on the story as well. They are interested in each other but its chapter 15 and they haven't even kissed yet. But at the same time - its not so slow that you are like Oh lord - KISS for pete's sake, kiss already!!!! Its exactly right. Very Happy smiley face

And your writing style is just a breeze to read and enjoy. Reading smiley face
 
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Alassante

Joined: 11 Dec 2004
Reviews: 459
Location: Hitchhiking to Rivendell
Thu Jul 07, 2005 2:06 pm

Okay - just when I was getting ready to come to FL to kill you for Thranduil being so oblivious to the fact that she wants him to kiss her - he finally does. And oh what a kiss. Kiss smiley face This story has totally sucked me in. Shocked smiley face
 
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Alassante

Joined: 11 Dec 2004
Reviews: 459
Location: Hitchhiking to Rivendell
Wed Jul 13, 2005 8:13 pm

Okay I am going to hell. Angry smiley face I was supposed to review this story like 5 days ago and I forgot. When I saw your review of mine - I did the forehead smack! Head bang smiley face

I love this story. It was so enjoyable from beginning to end. There was not one point that I can recall that I thought it dragged at all yet it had incredible rich details about everything Thranduil and Mirkwood. I cannot wait to read part two. I almost hate the fact that soon they will have a child so they have to transition to the parental units rather than just a stud and his girl. Very Happy smiley face

Ellisk - your writing style is beautiful and you are a great story teller. Now join up the V.V. so we can go on some misadventures together. Twisted Evil smiley face
 

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