Joined: 11 Dec 2004 Reviews: 459
Location: Hitchhiking to Rivendell
Thu Jun 23, 2005 6:12 pm
I'm baaaaackkkkkkkk!!
Whew! I just finished part 15 and I think I am in love with that stud. No wonder Legolas is so sexy - he gets it from his way too hot daddy.
I am totally caught up in this story. I love your characterizations. Even bit characters have a richness to them that I enjoy, rather than just a name and a few spoken lines. The guard we never saw in the trees had a presence even!!!
Lindomiel is adorable. I told you that wench Marti would be back (course you already knew but still I just wanted to say I told you so ) I like the pacing on the story as well. They are interested in each other but its chapter 15 and they haven't even kissed yet. But at the same time - its not so slow that you are like Oh lord - KISS for pete's sake, kiss already!!!! Its exactly right.
And your writing style is just a breeze to read and enjoy.
Alassante
Joined: 11 Dec 2004 Reviews: 459
Location: Hitchhiking to Rivendell
Thu Jul 07, 2005 2:06 pm
Okay - just when I was getting ready to come to FL to kill you for Thranduil being so oblivious to the fact that she wants him to kiss her - he finally does. And oh what a kiss. This story has totally sucked me in.
Alassante
Joined: 11 Dec 2004 Reviews: 459
Location: Hitchhiking to Rivendell
Wed Jul 13, 2005 8:13 pm
Okay I am going to hell. I was supposed to review this story like 5 days ago and I forgot. When I saw your review of mine - I did the forehead smack!
I love this story. It was so enjoyable from beginning to end. There was not one point that I can recall that I thought it dragged at all yet it had incredible rich details about everything Thranduil and Mirkwood. I cannot wait to read part two. I almost hate the fact that soon they will have a child so they have to transition to the parental units rather than just a stud and his girl.
Ellisk - your writing style is beautiful and you are a great story teller. Now join up the V.V. so we can go on some misadventures together.
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Last edited by Alassante on Wed Aug 24, 2005 6:23 pm