Reviews for "The Fallen"
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SamwiseTheStrong
Joined: 27 Feb 2004 Reviews: 52
Location: Oregon, USA
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Mon Aug 30, 2004 1:08 am
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This is a very lovely story, and I do hope you will continue with it. It will be interesting to see where you take it. BTW where did Boromir come from?!?!?!
Luv,
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Carolyn
Joined: 19 Jun 2003 Reviews: 4
Location: New South Wales, Australia
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Tue Aug 31, 2004 9:41 pm
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Like the way you portray the interelationships of the characters, particularly in Ch 1. Hope to see more dialogue between Boromir and Aragorn, and more action as they hopefully try to figure out what's happened to Ithilien and Legolas. Think you have tone of voice right on target especially for Boromir and as a huge Boromri fan really enjoy seeing him still among the living and being Steward to Aragorn King. good work! More please
Oh also love the way Eldarion is drawn to Boromir and his (Boromir's) awkward kindness and remarks about elves!
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DarkElfChilde

Joined: 23 Aug 2004 Reviews: 29
Location: I'm located somewhere
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Wed Sep 01, 2004 10:39 am
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This story sounds familiar...I think I've read it either at ff.net or adultfanfiction.net...am I right? Probably not, but continue this, please?
Your friendly elf,
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