Reviews for "Crossroads of Time"

Sat Sep 11, 2004 1:08 pm

Oooo, she kissed him... Laughing smiley face

Not a bad way to spend the night before you think you're about to die...not bad at all! I really love the internal dialogue that she's constantly having with herself. She's such an enchanting character. Keep up the good work, Ellie...I'll be anxiously awaiting your next update Very Happy smiley face

Michelle....

Fri Sep 17, 2004 11:12 am

Really well written, interesting plot and characters. Yay!

Sun Oct 03, 2004 8:57 pm

oh the nerve of those two the brother of gloy.iam kinda not like em right now
and turgon all tho he didint put her to death he was kinda harsh to gloy.
whens the next update Confused smiley face

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: got me grous whats ganna happen now.
Please update soon.

Tue Oct 26, 2004 10:14 am

Okay, I am so completely hooked on this story!! LOve that hard headed, stubborn Glorfindel! What an awful patient (but then men are). Glad the brothers got a dose of reality! OOH what a hard decision to sort out regarding Maeglin!!! Please update again soon!!! well done, well written, well thought out!

Tue Oct 26, 2004 8:43 pm

The stark realizations conveyed regarding Maeglor's death were tear jerking! I loved the kiss with Glorfindel she snuck in when no one was looking. Very sweet. The reason for her loss of concentration was also cute.

Very interesting dilemma, trying not to change history.

I can't wait for more, so please update soon!

Talasi

Tue Oct 26, 2004 10:07 pm

woooooo id be drooling too if i saw glory like that to Big Wink smiley face

iam so surprised the bothers apoligised,i thought they need a good Naughty!!! smiley face

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i love where this is going i wonder how this is gann owrk out ,mmmm LOL sign smiley face

please post agin Soon smiley face

Tess

Thu Oct 28, 2004 7:50 pm

What a great chapter! I was so shocked and happy that Celoril and Elindir realized that they had been treating Ariella unfairly. Their apology to her was very unexpected and I think Ariella handled the situation very well... Smile smiley face

Ariella's reaction to Glorfindel's nakedness was hilarious. He actually seemed amused and somewhat pleased by her reaction. I guess he didn't mind her looking, heh? That's VERY interesting...

I'm getting nosy-vibes from Lhûnedhel. LOL!! He seems like they type that would snoop around to find out exactly what Ariella is about, and where she's from. I don't see him giving up on finding out more about her.

I loved the chapter! It's great to see the relationships that Ariella are now developing, and it's great to see other's becoming more accepting of her. I felt like the ending of the chapter was very important to the story, and was written fantastically. We now know that Ariella's actions have affected the future. Hmm, or have they? Has her healing of Maeglin changed the future? So many questions!

Keep up the good work, and I'll be looking out for your next update,

Michelle... Very Happy smiley face

Tue Nov 02, 2004 9:05 am

excellent story, Ellie. as I have told you before, I think you've a very creative edge here, different. Of course I know more than many, and I think the readers will find the story full of twists and turns... I look forward to more and just wanted to pop in and say great job.. keep up the good work... it's not easy with RL... so take those few moments and dream... we shall .. of Glorfindel and the days of old....

hugs
Fianna

Tue Nov 02, 2004 1:54 pm

Oh no! What's goin' on?!!! I know when people are under stress they often seek comfort in others... but Lhûnedhel? They seemed to be getting awfully cozy with one another Confused smiley face

Not good. And I know that you writers really enjoy trying to trick us readers...you really got me good with this part:
"She felt arms envelope her as she was pulled sideways into a tight embrace. She
nuzzled against the warm presence beside her, desperately needing the comfort only
another living being could provide." - Crossroads of Time
I just knew, for sure, that it was Glorfindel that was embracing her. I'm sorry if I'm being repetative but I'm completely shocked! Shocked smiley face

I never would have seen Lhûnedhel and Ariella EVEN becoming friends...especially seeing as how they started off on the wrong foot. Nice twist Very Happy smiley face

This was yet another fantastic chapter, Ellie. You're doing a wonderful job and I hope that you'll update soon Very Happy smiley face

Michelle...

Wed Nov 03, 2004 2:03 am

omsg her and the healer ,ohhhhh no ok please tell me not those to aw what goint to happen with glory then Sad smiley face

Please up date soon Exclamation smiley face

Tess

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