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Tesseleve
Joined: 24 Jun 2004 Reviews: 73
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Thu Nov 04, 2004 5:47 pm
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ok your going to leve us haning for a wile arent you :
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ghettoelleth

Joined: 06 Nov 2004 Reviews: 378
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Sat Nov 06, 2004 2:27 pm
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I'm am currently typing from under my desk in a fetal postion. Write faster woman! I didn't think I was going to get into this story. That's what I get for thinking! If you have one of them there job thingies that's keeping your from spending every waking moment writing, I say we take up a fund so you can stay home and go faster.
I am confused 'bout one thing though, (I'm not a big simarillion officionado yet) if Glorfindel dies fighting a balrog in 21 years, how does he go on to meet ariella's parents? Sorry, dont'cha just hate questions about your story line?
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004 Reviews: 269
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Sun Nov 21, 2004 8:51 pm
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What great chapter! So, now we're beginning to find out what the others think of Ariella. Istadan, certainly seemed very interested in her...hmm, Ariella could prove to be a VERY busy girl. It seems that she's peaked more than just the interest of Glorfindel. And speaking of Glorfindel... Could there have been any more sexual tension between those two?! Why, oh why did someone have to come in right when they were lip-locking?! Grrr...
I loved everything about this chapter! Your descriptions are superb, and the moods that you create with your words are outstanding...great job!
Anxiously awaiting your next update,
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Talasi
Joined: 29 Mar 2004 Reviews: 116
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Mon Nov 22, 2004 1:54 pm
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Excellent!!!! I really enjoyed this chapter. Wonderful kiss. Glorfindel's playfulness is superb....can't get enough. It is wonderful to see this side of him. I am very curious how she plays into the history if he is to have a family, but I trust your vision. Please update soon.
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marcia

Joined: 10 Jun 2004 Reviews: 53
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Sun Jan 16, 2005 4:07 am
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Ellie, where have you gone! Please post more of your fascinating story....such an interesting premise and so well written. Do you need a beta? Is that slowing you down?
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Talasi
Joined: 29 Mar 2004 Reviews: 116
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Sat Jan 22, 2005 3:36 am
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This is so great! She is getting quite a lot of very intriguing attention. I really like the loremaster. She and Glory are just beyond sweet together. I am thoroughly enjoying this story, and look forward to your next update.
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ghettoelleth

Joined: 06 Nov 2004 Reviews: 378
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Sat Jan 22, 2005 4:19 am
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Ellie, I am so glad to see you back and posting more of this story, we've missed it very much and I'm glad you've decided to continue. I love you characters and your writing is very enjoyable. Thank you.
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004 Reviews: 269
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Mon Jan 24, 2005 11:41 am
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Go Ariella!
Ariella really does have all of the hottest elves around chasing after her, doesn't she! Lhunedhel, Istadan, Glorfindel...she has them all! Lucky girl!
I'm really interested in seeing how she'll juggle spending time with each of the elves; while, not interfering with the past...so that she will not affect the future. Tricky, tricky...no wonder she's concerned about what she's doing there.
Linanna's observation about Ariella's "company" made me laugh. I was thinking the exact same thing.
Wonderful job, Ellie! Your updates are always worth the wait Keep up the great work, and update soon!
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Talasi
Joined: 29 Mar 2004 Reviews: 116
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Tue Feb 01, 2005 3:38 pm
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Ellie,
UGH!!!!~! You can't leave it there. You just can't!
Another most excellent chapter. Lhûnedhel's admission definitely complicates things. I feel for him, though I am not surprised. I loved your description of Istadan's reaction to her healing. Seems he could fall for her too.
Silly elleth. Why can she not see Glory is referring to her? That was just a beautiful moment...right up until the intrusion. Figures.
Please update soon. I cannot wait to see how things are clarified with Glorfindel. *sigh*
Hugs,
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Firbereth
Joined: 15 Jan 2005 Reviews: 2
Location: somewhere on the net looking for fantastically fabolously GREAT LotR fan fiction!
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Tue Feb 01, 2005 9:04 pm
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Grr!!!!!!!! You left me hanging! Please update soon! I'm a big Gorfindel fan ....I've been reading this since you first posted it...I apoligize for not reviewing sooner but I'm not much of a review type of person....I'm just doing it now to let you know that you're doing an AWESOME job!
So keep up the good work! And I'll start pulling out my hair if you don't update soon! *starts subconsciously tugging on hair*
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