Reviews for "Crossroads of Time"

Wed Feb 02, 2005 7:31 pm

Wow!

Great chapter!

Poor Lhûnedhel, I felt kind of sorry for him when Ariella didn't respond to his declaration. I could just picture a poor, pouty-mouthed elf, sulking away... Sad smiley face

*sigh*

But on the other hand, there's Istadan. What's up with him? I think he thought Ariella's reaction meant that maybe she had feelings for him. Is that what he thought?

And Glorfindel. He should have just said what he had to say, and gotten it over with! I felt like shaking, slapping, and yelling at him all at once. LOL! That darn servant just had to walk in at *THAT* moment . Grrrrr.........

Her relationships are getting very complicated. I love it! Keep up the good work...you're definitely keeping me guessing with this story.

You are evil for leaving that cliffy at the end, but that's okay...I forgive you. Just write more, and post more soon! Very Happy smiley face

Michelle... Very Happy smiley face

Mon Feb 07, 2005 2:28 pm

NOOOOOOO! Don't leave it there. That is just evil. He just has to listen. She needs to make him listen. I can't imagine how she will patch things up with the others, though. She is extremely naive, but not heartless or cruel. She needs to just tell Glorfindel everything, IMHO. I really like Idril. Perhaps Idril can get Glory to listen.

Don't leave us hanging here
Crying or Very sad smiley face

Talasi

Tue Feb 08, 2005 4:48 pm

Oh, no! Glorfindel has it all wrong, and he won't even listen to Ariella! Poor Ariella...poor Glorfindel! Sad smiley face

So, all three of them are interested in her...and want to marry her! Wow! I feel sorry for all of them; but mostly for Ariella. She has to make sure that her actions do not affect the outcome of the future. Poor Ariella!

I did find her conversation with Idril very interesting. Perhaps, she is meant to be with ONE of her suitors...hopefully, that ONE will be Glorfindel Very Happy smiley face

The others can find another elleth Very Happy smiley face

Great job, Ellie! I'm going to start calling you "EVIL ELLIE" if you keep leaving cliffhangers like this! Laughing smiley face

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Michelle...

Wed Feb 09, 2005 5:14 am

Oh Ellie Ellie Ellie. This is the lovliest story. I'm so glad I didn't get a chance to catch up until the last two chapters were up or I would have been seriously put out. Once again, I'm so glad you've come back to this. I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Sun Feb 20, 2005 12:40 am

Great chapter, Ellie!

You've definitely managed to keep me guessing with this story; I had no idea that Ariella was even thinking about doing such a drastic thing.

The way that Ariella confronted each of her suitors was so sad; knowing that each of their hearts would be broken. While they both handled her confession fairly well, I couldn't help but feel extremely sorry for Lhûnedhel - especially since we know that actually has NO ONE to love Crying or Very sad smiley face

So sad...

The end of the chapter was great! I was wondering if anyone would save her, and sure enough, someone did. Yay! Smile smiley face

Lovely chapter! Can't wait to read more...

Michelle...

Sun Feb 20, 2005 12:20 pm

Ariella scared the crap outta me girl. Glad Glorfindel got there in time all gimped up as he is. I am really looking forward to seeing those two together and at peace for a while. Breaks my heart what's coming and I hope they get a little happiness for a while. Istadan *sigh* I'm all fan girly over that guy. What a wonderful character you created. I hope we get to see more of him, even though he's gotten his dear john. He's kinda teh hawt! Not many OCs do that for me but he's so very first agey and I love those tortured elves.

Thu Mar 03, 2005 4:58 pm

Those brothers of his......crack me up. I could not have kept a straight face and feigned sleep with that going on. Very Happy smiley face

This was a great chapter, but it leaves me feeling sad....knowing what is to come. I hope that they have an amazing 22 years together, but the thought of Glory spending the ages alone after his return from Mandos is sad. Perhaps I will have to lobby the Valar to let her return as an elf in that age. *looks hopeful*

Irregardless of the future, I am much relieved that they have worked out their problem and decided to bond most quickly. I was actually rooting for a spontaneous bonding, had they not been interrupted *smirk*

Talasi

Sat Mar 05, 2005 10:49 am

You just gotta love the relationship between siblings. The teasing between them was very sweet, funny, and realistic. Laughing smiley face

I’m so happy that Glorfindel and Ariella have finally made-up, and are now planning their future. I was shocked, and very sad, when Glorfindel told Ariella about his premonitions, but happy that Ariella still feels that they do have future together. Very romantic.

Lovely chapter, Ellie! I’ll be anxiously awaiting your next update. Very Happy smiley face

Michelle...
PS. Ariella seems to be busy with Glorfindel, so why don't you send Lhûnedhel on over to me? Very Happy smiley face

I'll take care of him Twisted Evil smiley face

Sat Mar 12, 2005 5:08 pm

*Sigh* Finally married. Can we have about 30 chapters of wedded bliss before you kill them all? Or maybe you could just send Maeglin into the future. If you do, send him to my house. I'm starting a reform school for psychotic first age elves. He'll be in good company, Feanor and Maedhros are already on step 3. Another lovely chapter my dear. And anyone reading this, go read Ellie's shorty, Does she or Doesn't she, its a stunner.

Mon Mar 14, 2005 1:58 pm

Wonderful story!!!!..Update soon please!!! And Lhunedhel....you can come to my house...hehehe!!!

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