Reviews for "Crossroads of Time"

Mon Mar 14, 2005 8:02 pm

Oh, Ellie, that was such a wonderful chapter! Smile smiley face

Ariella's hesitation about her impending nuptials was so sweet. I can definitely understand why she would think twice about what she was doing, but in the end, who could really resist Glorfindel? Very Happy smiley face

I really love the relationship between Ariella and Idril. They seem very at ease with one another, and it's easy to see that they care a great deal about each other.

I'm interested in seeing how Ariella and Glorfindel will handle their new communication skills. Very Happy smiley face

How much will he discover about her past, if anything? Ooooooo, I can't wait to see how this will unfold.

Great chapter, Ellie! Update soon Very Happy smiley face

Michelle...

Fri Mar 18, 2005 11:24 pm

Apologies for taking so long to review~!! Bad me. This was a beautiful chapter. The wedding ceremony and everything about it was lovely! *sigh* Glory was amazing. This is a great story. Love it! Very well written with stunning imagary.

Talasi

Fri Apr 08, 2005 8:33 pm

ohhhhhhh this is getting really good. really good chapter ,love the wedding.
so whens the next up date? not ganna leve us haning are ya Confused smiley face

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please UPDATE SOON Exclamation smiley face

TESS

Wed Apr 20, 2005 7:52 am

Oh Ellie, you have the meanest beta! Shocked smiley face

I love the end result, you've added and snipped and its very clean. No wasted motion. Ugh, enough of the technical crap. How much do we love Glorfindel? He is so teh hawt. Poor Ariela. You know my favorite part is when Glorfinion is born, so sweet. I'm glad we got heaps of family life and lurvin' before you tear our guts out. I don't suppose you could just run over to the mole house and whack teh ebol guy in his sleep, could you? Oh, I know, get Istadan the other teh hawt guy to do it. He's manly, he'll save them. Ugh, fine.... Wonderful chapter, is the next one done yet?

Jesxxx

Wed Apr 20, 2005 10:10 pm

Wonderful chapter! You had me scared there for a moment about the twins. *sniff* Seeing Glorfindel's vulnerability and fear of losing her just tears me apart! As always, it is very well written and emotionally moving.

Talasi

Sat Apr 23, 2005 6:46 pm

Yay, a brand new chapter!

I was on an emotional rollercoaster throughout this entire chapter. At the beginning of the chapter, I was joyful one moment, and in the next moment I was anxious. In the middle of the chapter I was filled with feelings of concern and sorrow for Glorfindel and Ariella. But in the end, I was filled with complete and utter joy and hope for the future of Glorfindel, Ariella, and their new family.

Glorfindel’s acceptance of Ariella’s secret really shows how much he loves her. Now, I only hope that he will be as understanding when the rest of the truth comes out. I’m sure he will be.

Oh, and it was great to see the return of Lhûnedhel. Very Happy smiley face

It was undoubtedly an awkward situation for him and Ariella, but I really like the way they handled themselves. Very nice.

Wonderful chapter, Ellie! It was so worth the wait. I hope that your daughter is well, now, and that everything is okay with you. Big Hug smiley face

Take care, Ellie...and keep up the great work!

Michelle...

Thu May 05, 2005 2:59 pm

I have been so enjoying this one. Can I kick Turgon's butt? Very Happy smiley face

Wed Jun 22, 2005 1:48 am

This was another wonderful chapter. I really enjoyed it. As I sat here reading it, "Into the West" started playing. *sniff* The unavoidable future is stifling. I am relieved now that she has told him of her heritage. Excellent!!!!!

Talasi Wave smiley face

Fri Jun 24, 2005 12:29 pm

Hi Ellie!

I loved this chapter. It really shows the strength of the relationship between Glorfindel and Ariella. How many guys...uhhh, elves...do you know that would be *THAT* understanding? I don't know any. LOL!!! But obviously, the love between these two is strong enough to endure.

I got teary when Ariella was thinking of how she had to train her children so that they may survive the future war. The thought of that is a mother's worst nightmare. How Ariella holds all that she knows to herself, is beyond me.

The part when Idril was contemplating her future with Tuor was great. Ariella's teasing was hilarious.

Lovely chapter, Ellie! Very romantic and heartwarming Smile smiley face

Keep up the great work!

Michelle...

Wed Jun 29, 2005 5:23 pm

wow this is really turning out to be a wonderfull story,
love glorfindel sencetive side, wish more men where like that.
this is reall getting good,
Please update soon!!!!!!!
tess

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