Reviews for "Crossroads of Time"

Mon Aug 01, 2005 9:23 pm

Ellie,
This was a great chapter. I was getting ready to spank Glory myself, had he not reformed. His reaction is understandable, but I'm glad they worked it all out. His poor children. Brought tears to my eyes in a few spots. It is also very interesting that he knows bits and pieces of his future, and also that they may yet be together again at some point. *sniff*

Hugs,
Talasi

Mon Aug 08, 2005 2:01 am

i cant belive the nerve of glory, and hear i was thinking he was a sweety and what does he do ?,
he does an 180, isnt that just like a man,lol i love what you and your beta are doing with this story ,good job to you both,
please update Soon
Tess

Sat Aug 20, 2005 9:27 pm

Fantastic chapter, Ellie! Smile smiley face

I was wondering what the fall-out would be like after Ariella's confession, but NEVER did I imagine that Glorfindel would treat her and the children like that.

Your characterizations are so wonderful. Even though Glorfindel treated his family terribly, I still felt sorry for him. After all, he had just found out that his wife and children were not what they appeared to be. You have to give the guy a little slack for that reason alone. Smile smiley face

The children were wonderful. I think including them into this chapter definitely gave us a glimpse of their family life. I'm glad that Glorfindel finally came around...although it took a almost tragic event for that to happen.

Very well done. I can't wait to read your next update. Smile smiley face

Michelle...

Wed Sep 21, 2005 4:21 pm

hi elle ,
i was wondering how you and your house is doing?, where you able to get it fixed? ,houses can some times take a wile to get fixed.
was the damage that bad ? i hope not. i hope you are well.
TESS

Thu Oct 13, 2005 4:50 am

Oh no, please don't leave us hanging like that! I really love this story and I can't wait for the new chapter to come out!!! Very Happy smiley face

Thu Oct 13, 2005 1:17 pm

Excellent chapter, Ellie!

I certainly didn't expect for any of those things to happen Shocked smiley face

. When Ariella was trying to contact Glorfindel, I swear to you, I was literally on the edge of my seat with anticipation! And then you just HAD to end the chapter! Grrrrrr....LOL!! Please update soon...I can't wait to find out what happens next.

I'm sorry to hear about your house, and I hope that things are getting back to normal for you. Thanks for finding the time to update - I really appreciate it. Smile smiley face

Michelle...

Tue Oct 18, 2005 2:42 am

Ellie,
This was yet another wonderful chapter!! Very suspenseful! Has she changed the future? Yikes! I hope Glory tears him into shreads.

I hope to see more soon, but I understand how real life is *sigh* I'll be here when you can update again.

Hugs,
Talasi

Sat Dec 03, 2005 7:28 pm

Happy holidays!

I think that this was the first chapter that showed how Ariella being an alien, and the decisions that she has made since she came to her new world, really affects her and her family. Teasing was not something that SHE had to deal with, but her children now have to struggle with it. They are actually outcast because of how they are. That's so sad. Crying or Very sad smiley face

Glorfinion's reaction to the news was heartbreaking. I feel sorry for him, but also mad at him for yelling at his mother. I feel sorry for him because it's seems as though he hates what he is, and also what his mother is. I'm mad at him because he yelled at her. At least Glorfindel was there to support Ariella. Goodness knows she needed all the support that she could get.

Wonderful chapter! I can't wait to find out what happens next! I'll be on the look-out for your next chapter. Smile smiley face

Michelle...

Sun Jan 15, 2006 5:50 am

Oooh girl, your Maeglin's a really mean guy. I'm still enjoying this as much as I ever did and I'm so glad to be able to get caught up on reading and reviewing. I totally understand where you are right now in your writing. Trying to write a story you love and have so much invested in and still give equal time to your new discovery, Finarfin. No one gives him a more brilliant voice. But I have to say here, you lend equal brilliance to your Maeglin. He was just perfect. I can't wait to see where this all leads in the end and can only hope to encourage you to keep going. Remember, being my mentor you have the responsibility of setting the example by finishing the story, lol. Thanks for three wonderful chapters. Oh, and the tension you built for the whole bear hunting scene was just brilliant, my dear!

Jesxxx

Sun Feb 12, 2006 4:04 am

I just found this story today and wish to thank you for hours of mystery, angst, and WAFF. I know that Gondolin has a sad ending as a city and Glorfindel and the Balrog makes me weep. However, will some of this strange and wonderful family get out alive and have a chance for long and productive lives? I look forward to more story soon.

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