Reviews for "Crossroads of Time"

Mon Feb 13, 2006 6:51 pm

I can see how Chapter 20 would be difficult to write; it was difficult to read. Not any fault of the writer; just so difficult for Glorfindel's family and the judgment of Turgon. It's so sad that Turgon does not see the viper in his midst. I look forward to more.

Fri Feb 17, 2006 1:16 am

Wonderful!!! You really had me worried there for a moment. I'm so glad they have resolved this and their tormenter has learned his lesson. I really enjoy this story.

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Fri Feb 17, 2006 9:01 pm

I've been meaning to read this story for a while now but didn't get around to it until yesterday. This is such a unique premise. I love your characters, both canon and original. I think you've done an excellent job of portraying the relationships, especially familial ones, between them. I know this is going to be a tear jerker at some point, and that point is coming soon. I'm looking forward to seeing how you handle the fall of Gondolin, Glorfindel's death, and everything else that happens. I know RL has a tendency to get in the way, but I hope you'll be able to update soon.

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Sun Feb 19, 2006 9:39 am

Any chapter that includes Istadan instantly gets extra points from me. Twisted Evil smiley face

His nervousness over telling Ariella about her daughters' behavior was very funny. But like Ariella told him, who could blame them for behaving that way towards him, he's hot!!! Well, those weren't her exact words but close enough. lol

A very touching chapter, Ellie. Glorinion's heroic act really bought about a lot of positive change for his family and friends. Hopefully, everything will continue to go well for all of them, but I know that probably won't be the case.

Wonderful chapter! I can't wait for your next update. Smile smiley face

Michelle...

Mon Feb 20, 2006 11:34 am

Poor Istadan! I gotta say I was with Ariella on this one, but I had the luxury of being able to actually laugh. That was so sweet and so funny.

The incident with the Morang, Glorfinion, and Arianna was tragic but I'm glad it brought about a healing in the rift between the younger elves. I can only imagine how tickled Maeglin is going to sound when he gets Morang out of earshot of Turgon though. Your Maeglin is so mean and dark, I am going to love comparing our two for the short while that yours remains a part of the story. Your characters are all so loveable and wonderful with the exception of Maeglin, it makes it really easy to dislike him intensely. But on a brighter note, I feel sorry for him when I read him here and that makes my own job easier, Very Happy smiley face

. I can't wait to find out the outcome of the fall of Gondolin, who survives, who doesn't and what those of the Mole who survive will feel if you should delve into that aspect of it. But I gotta tell you, I'm not looking forward to reading what I know WILL happen, its going to be gut wrenching to read. Excellent job on another excellent chapter, chica. Thanks for updating, now go do it some more... Shocked smiley face

Wed Apr 26, 2006 11:09 pm

ok i wold really like to what happen next . when the next chapter? love this story do keep going , you have a very creative mind, its seems to have gotten kinda of quiet here lately
please update soon

Tue Jun 06, 2006 2:48 pm

"Ariella, sensing the continued turmoil in her husband’s heart, led Glorfindel to their bed. He lay down beside her and she gathered him in her arms. She held him close as he buried his face in her shoulder and breast and wept for all that he had lost in Valinor and for the horrible loss that was yet to come." - Crossroads of Time

You captured the love and loss of these two perfectly. Crying or Very sad smiley face

You know, I often wonder at people who want to know when they are going to die. A few years back there was a website that, supposidly, could tell you the exact date of a person's death. Reading this chapter, affirms for me that I would *NOT* want to know the date of my death. The nervous anticipation of death....*shivers* I'd rather not know.

I can't wait to find out who will survive the fall! Great job, Ellie!

Michelle...

Thu Jun 15, 2006 11:03 am

Oh, that was so sad Ellie. Sorry it took me so long to get to this, but you know...

This is just getting to the point where I can barely get through the chapter without crying, and now poor Arlianna. Hope the next chapter isn't so long in coming.

Sad, nostaligic, wonderful stuff.

Gxxx

Sat Jul 22, 2006 1:31 am

Thanks for the tissue warning. I hope she went home although I know she did not want to leave Glorfindel, dead or alive. I am looking forward to the next installment, with tissues in hand. Wonderful story.

Tue Aug 08, 2006 11:05 pm

awwwwwwww grrrrrr elle so not fair Mad smiley face

i loved this chapter
it so sooooooooo good
you really should make this into a mini book, but leve us haning like this, Not Fair!!!! arg arg arg*headbangs the wall,lol
please update SOOOOOOOON!!

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