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Xenon
Joined: 19 Apr 2005 Reviews: 3
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Sat Jul 02, 2005 7:39 pm
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| I loved the new chapter. I just wish that it wasn't close to finishing. Was lovely to see them all reunited, and I really enjoyed the end of the chapter and the way Thomas and Rebecca were reunited. By the way, doesn't Thomas kissing Rebecca and not caring about who saw them count as the not regarding women's honor thing? If Thomas and Rebecca saty in ME, does Thomas get given the title Prince as well? Please let them stay in ME. But I have a bad feeling that you are hinting at them not staying because of Aragon mentioning the hardships they might face in adjusting to new life. However I hope that they do stay as it would be a shame to break sucha nice family apart. I was delighted to see Thomas again and more meaningfully accept Aragon as his father and it's lovely to see the fatherly relationship of Aragon with Thomas. |
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KristyDi

Joined: 11 Jun 2005 Reviews: 42
Location: GA
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Sun Jul 17, 2005 3:34 pm
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Good Chapter! I like seeing Aragron trying to balance his duties with his life and seeing his relationship with Thomas develop. It's also cool to see Thomas becoming a man rather than a boy. You're doing that well that change is subtle, but noticable.
It really worries me that Gandalf won't let Aragorn knight Thomas. Does that mean they're going back home? I hope not. How could you come back here after all that?
I can't wait to see them back in the city. I wonder what meeting Arewn will be like. |
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StArSpLaSh

Joined: 18 Jan 2004 Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
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Tue Aug 02, 2005 10:57 pm
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OOOO I hope Arwen is in the next chapter! When will Rebecca and Thomas get betrothed?? I hope you update soon!! hehe |
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StArSpLaSh

Joined: 18 Jan 2004 Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
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Tue Aug 16, 2005 12:52 am
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Another AMAZING chapter! I can't wait to figure out what Gandalf knows about Rebecca and Thomas! Update soon please  |
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Sorcia

Joined: 16 Jan 2004 Reviews: 80
Location: Gods, Sean in glasses, how dishy
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Fri Aug 19, 2005 10:29 am
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Just found this fic and have spent the last 72 hours reading it . Interesting idea and I like the way the storyline and your writing has developed. I, of course, have just about as many questions about 'why are they there' as those in the story do. Even though everyone, or just about everyone, is in one place, I can see the story still has quite of bit of life in it and I hope you don't hurry thorough the rest of the telling. Cheers |
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jlmart
Joined: 09 Aug 2004 Reviews: 2
Location: Canada
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Sat Sep 03, 2005 2:25 am
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| I am really ehjoying this story. When I was a child I remember reading a series of books about WWll - each one centred around a battle of some sort with a young person as the central character, such as Emily at Bataan. It made history seem so much more real to me as a 12 year old because I could identify with these characters. Your story reminds me very much of those books so perhaps there is an element of nostalgia in my appreciation. Nevertheless, I find myself looking forward to each new chapter with great anticipation. Thank you for a great story! |
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StArSpLaSh

Joined: 18 Jan 2004 Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
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Sun Sep 04, 2005 11:41 pm
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Woohoo! Their wedding night hehe Newayz another awesome story and as always I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm still waiting to find out what Gandalf knows about Thomas and Rebecca! hehe |
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nienor

Joined: 26 May 2005 Reviews: 58
Location: Cologne (Germany)
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Sun Sep 25, 2005 7:10 am
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I've finally caught up with this fic and just wanted to drop in to tell you that I really enjoy it. I think that it's the first girl/boy dropped into M-e fic that really works. The way you had them find their way into the storyline is really convincing, and it's good that you stayed as close to canon as possible. I also like the long chapters.
And now I'm waiting for an explanation about this map .
Greetings! nienor |
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KristyDi

Joined: 11 Jun 2005 Reviews: 42
Location: GA
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Sun Sep 25, 2005 10:13 am
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Oh this was my favorite chapter in a while! I really enjoy this fic! Like nienor says, it's a boy/girl dropped in ME that really works! I appericate how you've developed the realtionships between Thomas and Rebecca and Aragorn. It was touching to see how Aragorn was affected by missing their birthdays. I can't wait to hear what Gandalf has to say about the map. I'm also egar to see what Aragorn is getting Thomas to mark his 18th birthday.
Good job! |
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StArSpLaSh

Joined: 18 Jan 2004 Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
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Sun Sep 25, 2005 6:38 pm
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OMGOSH! I hate you right now!(not really) How could you stop right there!?!?! You are an evil evil person! I hope you update soon!! I can't wait till we finally find out what Gandalf knows! hehe  |
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