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Vendie
Joined: 01 May 2004
Reviews: 59
Location: Iowa, USA
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Sun Sep 19, 2004 12:28 pm
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I love this so far - I can't wait to see what happens next. Keep it up!  |
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alexissteele
Joined: 22 Sep 2004
Reviews: 1
Location: Wisconsin
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Wed Sep 22, 2004 8:19 am
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ACK! PLEASE tell me chapter 14 is not the end of the story! You cannot leave it there! Very good writing. I was sitting at the edge of my seat during the entire fic! That's very good! Also, thought you should know that this was the first fic I've read on Open Scrolls! Thanks for giving me a wonderful gem to welcome me to the site!
~ Lexi |
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mediagirl42
Joined: 18 Aug 2003
Reviews: 1
Location: pennsylvania usa
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Mon Oct 11, 2004 9:31 pm
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I love this story so much, I have just finished chapter 10 and I can't wait to read the rest.  |
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Riverside
Joined: 13 Oct 2004
Reviews: 1
Location: Cleveland, England
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Wed Oct 13, 2004 5:16 pm
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I have really enjoyed what I have read so far (chapters 1- 3). Your depiction of Aragorn is one of the best I have come across!
Being a Boromir fan, I will probably stay up all night now reading the rest of the story - must see what happens next! |
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Amalleigh
Joined: 06 Nov 2004
Reviews: 1
Location: Cairo, Egypt
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Fri Nov 05, 2004 9:02 pm
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I have just found this wonderful story and spent a perfectly splendid afternoon reading all of the chapters. You have done an astounding job of creating this very believable AU and yet still keeping all the characters in character whilst you change their lives. As a Boromir and Faramir fancier of very long standing I am always looking for wonderful stories where Boromir does not die at Amon Hen. Bravo for making this story involving, in character and addictive. I look forward to the next chapter now that I've devoured all 23 posted. I am anxiously awaiting Aragorn's arrival....and to see how you handle Eowyn...whatever will happen if Faramir isn't in the Houses of Healing to keep her company once Aragorn heals them? Once more this is delightful work, well written and a splendid read.  |
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Senta
Joined: 10 Mar 2004
Reviews: 57
Location: UK
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Sat Dec 04, 2004 9:36 pm
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This is another great chapter of a wonderful story. I love the way you write Aragorn.Now i want to know if he can heal Boromir !
You are a very gifted writer. |
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dinah
Joined: 16 Dec 2003
Reviews: 2
Location: Jacksonville, FL
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Thu Dec 16, 2004 11:07 am
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| Enjoyed this story very much. Hope this isn't the end - would like to know how Boromir gets out of becoming Steward and pawns it off on Faramir. Just one little niggling thing - several of the chapters are duplicated. Example: chapter 6 - all of this chapter is there and then it starts again. There are several that way. I love long, long, long chapters and thought I was going to get one and then was disappointed. But was intrigued enough to continue until the current end of the story. Your writing style is very good, your characters are well rounded and believable and the plot is enticing. Sweets if I had you in a writing class of mine you would score an "A". |
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