Reviews for "Fighting The Fall"

Fri Sep 24, 2004 4:56 pm

This has started pretty well! Little things to watch I have mentioned below but overall, it was interesting and I wanted to read more. The characters are nicely done and you had a talent which is emerging regarding story telling.

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Modernisms like fluffy white towels.
Needs to be Beta Read - there are MANY errors in grammar and punctuation ie it's self instead of itself.
Names of OFC are funky and didnt look elvish to me! She should have a Noldorised name if she is a resident of Imladris but a Sinda name if she is from elsewhere.

These are wee things.

Good luck and continue!

Tue Sep 28, 2004 9:09 am

I agree with everything Moralenqua said. The beginning is nice and easy. I want to read more

Thu Oct 07, 2004 1:58 am

very good story ,like it so fare
whens the next up date Confused smiley face

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Tess

Sat Oct 09, 2004 8:49 pm

Off to a very good start. I agree with Moralanqua...only a few minor things. Please update soon. Glorfindel doesn't get near enough attention!!

Talasi

Tue Oct 12, 2004 11:27 am

This looks to be full of promise and I'm sure I won't be disappointed! Agree about the need to be more elvish... but then again, it's still too early to fuss... so, keep it up!

Tue Nov 02, 2004 7:15 pm

This story looks really promising..can't wait to see what you do with it!

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