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SpaceWeavil

Joined: 27 May 2004
Reviews: 365
Location: Looking at shiny things
Fri Oct 08, 2004 11:14 am
This is an interesting idea and the beginning of quite an exciting story, I feel. The only problem I found is that you switch tenses frequently throughout the story, but that is a problem that could easily be sorted out by a beta reader. Try the beta forum, perhaps, as there's always someone around there willing to take a look at a story and pick out little things like that. I think with that seen to, this would be a very good story indeed, and I'm already interested enough to see what happens next.
 
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SamwiseTheStrong
Joined: 27 Feb 2004
Reviews: 52
Location: Oregon, USA
Sat Oct 09, 2004 3:25 am
This seems to be a great story. Please do continue. Some parts could use some Beta-ing, but I'm sure you'll be able to find somebody to help you with that. Lovely!!
Luv,
Ur SamwiseTS
 
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