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Moralanqua

Joined: 12 May 2003 Reviews: 167
Location: Scotland
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Sat Oct 16, 2004 6:14 am
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Wonderful! This was just...wonderful! I pictured the scene immediately and that was thanks to your excellent atmosphere building. Just wonderful! *sigh* |
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Elentari

Joined: 13 May 2003 Reviews: 244
Location: Lost in elven dreams...
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Sat Oct 16, 2004 7:54 pm
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*fans herself*
Whoa. Pretty steamy darling. I am floored.
Nice change in perspectives- always a trciky thing, blast it- and the game of words was a delight. All in all, a delightful piece.
It is a very bad thing to make me need a cold shower when the weather is so darn cold, I say. |
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SamwiseTheStrong
Joined: 27 Feb 2004 Reviews: 52
Location: Oregon, USA
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Sun Oct 17, 2004 2:45 am
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This is very lovely. More please!!
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Duchess

Joined: 25 Mar 2004 Reviews: 187
Location: North Carolina
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Sun Oct 17, 2004 10:24 am
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| Oh man, that's not fair for either one of them! *shaking my head* Too bad it couldn't last a little bit longer. lol |
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SpaceWeavil

Joined: 27 May 2004 Reviews: 365
Location: Looking at shiny things
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Mon Oct 18, 2004 11:52 am
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I like this. It's a very different and effective way of treating a scene like this, and it worked really well.  |
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mistressofbucklebury
Joined: 26 Sep 2004 Reviews: 121
Location: England
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Tue Oct 26, 2004 2:14 am
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You can't leave them like that! It's just so cruel. Please update soon. |
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fairyfaye

Joined: 12 Jul 2004 Reviews: 17
Location: Arizona
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Tue Oct 26, 2004 4:44 pm
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Poor things! Looking forward to the next chapter. |
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Tesseleve
Joined: 24 Jun 2004 Reviews: 73
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Tue Oct 26, 2004 10:56 pm
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woooo iam sooooooo hooked please up date soon  |
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Tara
Joined: 29 May 2004 Reviews: 18
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Sun Oct 31, 2004 11:01 am
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| Every chapter is better than the last. Keep going please. |
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LucyTia
Joined: 16 Mar 2004 Reviews: 16
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Fri Nov 05, 2004 2:29 am
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| Oooooooh - thank you. What a lovely tale, from beginning to very happy ending. |
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