Reviews for "Fairy Lights and Fireflies"

Fri Oct 22, 2004 4:22 pm

Mechanically, this vignette is very well put together, which is refreshing and lovely in fanfic. Smile smiley face

I also thought your elfling Arwen was charming. Thank you for making her speech patterns so adult-like, which is appropriate even for very young elves. Yay! On the down side, I didn't find Faye a very interesting character for this world. In fact, there wasn't much of Middle-earth in this story at all, just some character and place names that were familiar. Have you considered changing the names and writing this as an original fantasy piece? I think it could work.

Fri Oct 22, 2004 5:03 pm

Hello Viv! Thanks for commenting! I'm glad you like how I characterized Arwen, and I see perfect sense in your criticism. Standing alone, this story isn't Tolkien-worthy at all. However, if you'd like some insight into who Faye really is (she didn't pop out of thin air, trust me), glance through the rest of my stories.

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Reviews for "Fairy Lights and Fireflies"