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Anieni
Joined: 27 Jan 2004
Reviews: 48
Location: Somewhere between fantasy and reality
Fri Nov 05, 2004 1:29 pm

*sigh* I love this story, I could read it over and over. It brings forth so many emotions that I'd have to write a long long review. Let me just say all of your writing amazes me, your capacity to weave tales is a precious gift.

Look forward to seeing more of it.


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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Sat Nov 06, 2004 1:01 pm

I've only read the Prologue, but I certainly plan to read the rest of it shortly. The intro sets the stage for some very compelling characterization. Your parallel technique flowed beautifully, making this seem more an epic poem than a piece of prose. That, of course, is very appropriate for Tolkien. Great start!
 
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Sat Nov 06, 2004 1:31 pm

Okay, done. Smile smiley face The story itself is swift, untangling the tangles almost immediately. I kind of liked that, not having to wait for the mysteries to sort themselves out. And the peek inside the workings of the Valar during all that Feanorian mess was very interesting. I enjoyed the alternate explanation for Thranduil's and Cirdan's presence in Middle-earth and am anticipating reading more stories of yours that employ this backstory.
 
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MrsAnalytica

Joined: 24 May 2013
Reviews: 45
Location: Belgium
Fri Jul 05, 2013 4:54 am

This was a really beautiful an intriguing story, and I loved it! I really hope you write a sequel...
 
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