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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Thu Nov 11, 2004 4:45 pm
First, excellent use of verbs! Dialogue was also lovely, adding to a comfortable pacing... except for those pesky dream sequences. They were long and bulky and static, really interferring with the flow of the story. I don't have a suggestion for fixing them right now, but it's something to be aware of. Other than that, you have an intriguing story going here.
 
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shadowslayer
Joined: 27 Nov 2004
Reviews: 24
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Sat Apr 23, 2005 8:28 pm
Why don't you update it I wonder if legolas actually catches up with aragorn to help him out (or vice versa) Confused smiley face: Confused smiley face: Confused smiley face: Confused smiley face: Confused smiley face: Confused smiley face: Confused smiley face:
 
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