Reviews for "Rider of the Mark"

Sun Jun 26, 2005 2:32 am

ohhh Zee...*sniffles* i liked how Aefre's POV was used for the destruction of the ring instead of Gamlings. I don't know why but it fits more.

Great job once again

Mon Jun 27, 2005 4:59 am

Ooooh, you woman you --- hurry and get him home to her! Frigg

Sun Jul 03, 2005 6:46 pm

Ahh, I love this story! Not only is the love story wonderful, you've added so many great details like the inclusion of the shield maidens who stole their father's and grandfathers stones (that put tears in my eyes and gave me chills) and Hama's son, Gamling's oath to Eomer. Ahh, I can't wait till you update again. Oh and get Gamling home to her they need each other.

Mon Jul 04, 2005 7:23 pm

This is a fantastic story. One of the hardest things to do (at least for me) is to show character development through dialog, and Zee, baby, you have that nailed! A pet peeve of mine is writing that tells you what the character is thinking and feeling rather than showing. Good dialog makes things come alive. You have taken a secondary character and made him come so much to life, I have started thinking of him as real... Where's the drooling smilie!? Wonderful romance and great sex scene. And thank god you have written characters that are mature enough to appreciate one another as mature human beings! I've written this review after chapter 21, PLEASE keep writing!!!!

Roh

Thu Jul 07, 2005 1:37 am

First off.. I loved this part!!! *points down*

"I SAID he is bringing his daughter, Lothiriel."

***ooooooh DAUGHTER... Princess! Mwuhahahahah!***

I was howling with laughter several times. I just love the gruff humor shared between Eomer and Gamling.

This was very real to me. All the details from cleaning Droegan's hooves to the atmosphere of the barn...brought me there. The emotions were tangible. The aftermath, the worries of the men for their home and loved ones, etc...really got to me.

It amazes me how you can crack me up, make me worry, piss me off, give me hope, and then drop a cliffhanger like that. Dammit, Zee!!!

Just kidding. This truly is one of the best stories I have read, which isn't easy to say....cuz there isn't a lot of elf action here, if ya know what I mean. he he This is actualy quite disturbing. Crazy smiley face

I must go and ponder this. I'm having an identity crisis. Must go find some Haldir smut. Outta here smiley face

This is a terrific ride, Zee!!!

Thu Jul 07, 2005 1:59 am

Aaaaah, Zee! I was absolutely devastated by this chapter. He's back with her ---- finally! Great - and great description of the Rohirrim leaving for home. Wonderful to read! And I believe that you're concocting something for poor Éomer, aren't you? You are sending him into the arms of Lothíriel ----- and with my knowledge(!) of your devious mind, you are going to make her such a match!

Well, off on holiday --- 'see' you when I get back in three weeks!
Love, Frigg

Thu Jul 07, 2005 7:27 pm

Oh my lord! Zee!! SOON!!!! LOL Very Happy smiley face

great job honey

Thu Jul 07, 2005 10:38 pm

grrr, You hurt Gamling! Please fix him soon! Evil or Very Mad smiley face

Oh this is so good please update soon. I love that Arfe's first reaction to the returning of a group of Riders was to head to his room and start removing clothes.

Sun Jul 17, 2005 6:08 pm

I've missed reviewing 2 chapters and I do apologize, had puter problems and couldn't find my link to Open Scrolls...but I'm back!
I enjoyed the details that you provide during conversations, not just their dialog but what they're doing and thinking during the conversation...very abundant details during this whole story, and I've come to attribute that to your other works as well. I could see the smoke in the air that Aefre could, I could feel Droegen's hoof in my hand while Gamling was grooming him, etc.
You have a gift Zee, and thanks for sharing it with us!

Sakai

Tue Jul 26, 2005 4:41 pm

I just love it. I hope you are going to sort out Eomer now!

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