Reviews for "Rider of the Mark"

Fri Aug 05, 2005 2:48 am

Ooooooh, Zee ---- and oooooh, again. You are really superseded by none! Clever to write in Eadignes to help Aefre with Gamling ..... and his ramblings about her not being naked .... he really is cute! Now ---- get him up (in more ways than one, and let her find out that a new little Rider is on his way .....) .... and then let them have fun with the fact that Éomer falls like a lug for Lothíriel. By the way, love the title of this chapter ..... soap operas galore! Love, Frigg

Thu Aug 11, 2005 9:22 pm

I've been a silent fan for a while now, and this latest chapter was eagerly anticipated. Wonderful job, I can't wait to hear the result of the talk! Very Happy smiley face

Keep up the good work!

Sun Aug 14, 2005 12:52 am

Avid reader of your work, enjoying the journey and I can see that someone will need to put up her feet soon I think Shocked smiley face

Sun Aug 14, 2005 1:25 am

Bloody hell. Ch. 24 left me breathless. It may still confuse some, but the italicised lines of what's going on in Gamling's head draw me in like a lasso. I just seem to fly through chapters and then sit here staring at my monitor wondering where the heck I've just been. Thank you again for an enthralling- and draining- reading experience.

Blessings,

Neume

Sun Aug 14, 2005 2:30 pm

LOL Zee! Loved the fact that speaking about spoiling his horse woke him up *giggles*

Tue Aug 16, 2005 12:23 pm

Just completed chapters 23 and 24...I enjoyed Aefre's and Eadignes' conversation while cleansing and treating Gamling...very good visualization...
Another outstanding updates!

Sincerely,
Sakai

Fri Aug 19, 2005 11:18 am

NeumeIndil said
> Bloody hell. Ch. 24 left me breathless. It may still confuse some, but the italicised lines of what's going on in Gamling's head draw me in like a lasso. I just seem to fly through chapters and then sit here staring at my monitor wondering where the heck I've just been. Thank you again for an enthralling- and draining- reading experience.
>
> Blessings,
>
> Neume

Ah, you've been in that uncharted, strange new territory... a man's mind.

Frightening, isn't it???

Thanks!

Sun Aug 28, 2005 1:47 am

Poor Gamling... it's like the dream where you go to school with no pants. :0) Very nice as always, I love that it was the threat of spoiling his horse that woke him up. And I've got a couple guesses about Aefre as well... I'll be waiting to see if my theories are true! Keep up the good work! Razz smiley face

Mon Aug 29, 2005 8:51 pm

Oh, Zee...I just caught up on all the chapters I hadn't yet read. This is by far your best work. You have given so much insight to a minor character, and your ability to fill in even the tiniest gaps in the storyline continues to astound me.

I LOVE your Eomer, and cannot wait to see your portrayal of he and Lothiriel.

And may I just say, again, YOU NEED TO WRITE SOMETHING PUBLISHABLE!!!!! You have amazing talent! While I applaud your use of it here, and appreciate beyond measure the entertainment you provide for free, why the hell don't you make some money off of it????

Nove Very Happy smiley face

Mon Sep 26, 2005 2:58 am

LMAO at dialogue in this chapter, specifically:

"I've fallen in love with my mother... EEEWWWW!"

and

"First babies come at any time; after that it takes 9 months." My grandfather said that years and years ago and my father repeats it now. And you're right, the male mind is a scary place. Maybe that's why we love them so much. Can't wait for more, as always, but I'll have to.

BB,
Neu

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