Reviews for "Rider of the Mark"

Thu Nov 03, 2005 10:21 am

>>oh god... he's reading my smut....

Fri Nov 04, 2005 4:56 am

As usual, the perfect next step. I'm so glad to hear Bruce is enjoying Rider as much as we are. Not for the first time, Zee, you brought me to tears. Line: "He decided he loved my spunkiness, my spit. He loved me. He told me once." I didn't like the ol' Mama-in-Law until this chapter, though I too loved her gumption. This was a great chapter for character development all the way around and I can't wait for the next one (I love a good fight!).

Blessings,
Neu

Fri Nov 04, 2005 11:26 am

This is a perfect realistic male/female relationship - emphasis on the male part!
If my husband of 14 years would suddenly start behaving romatic and muttering declarations of love I would send him straight to the next radiologist to have his head put into a computer tomograph, just to make sure everything is all right with his brain.
Dear old mom has the right idea.

And I can only second Frigg: 10 points from Italy.

Sun Nov 06, 2005 1:00 pm

Well, truthfully it can be said that I've never saw my Dad bringing home flowers etc either, and my parents are married for 25 years. He sometimes just appeared with a new kitchenware invention or other (microwave, a recent purchase) and tell her to use it.

lol.

Sun Nov 13, 2005 3:29 pm

Zee, darling ------ this was WONDERFUL; I believe that my entire neighbourhood hear m e laughing --- and I haven't stopped yet ...... this is GREAT!!! Poor Gamling ---- but I do love that man's determination. And your description of the three listening --- or trying to overhear. Great!!! Now --- when is Éomer returning to the story, because I believe that you promised something coming that way, too???????????????? Love, Frigg

Mon Nov 14, 2005 9:38 am

You did it again - you made my day with this update. As usual, of course!

Poor Gamling! Trying to do the right thing, without having the slightest idea what that could be.

And those three eavesdropping! Hilariously funny. That reminded me of an old Marx Brother movie.

More soon, please!

Tue Nov 15, 2005 3:10 am

I love it, I love it!!!!!!

I look forward to what's next. I get such a kick out of these two! Very Happy smiley face

Fri Nov 25, 2005 7:58 pm

I just wanted to say that I started reading this story not too long ago and I absolutely love it. Aefre is one of my favorite OCs and I love the dynamic between her and Gamling. I hope you are able to update soon!

Sun Dec 04, 2005 5:55 pm

Zee, have I told you how much I adore your story?

Sorry it's taken me an age to review, but better late than never I suppose. This is fan-flipping-tastic. I love how you have written Gamling, strong and witty and simply hilarious. Aefre is just so loveable and snappy that I think my hubby wants her wrapped for christmas in his stocking. [Yes, my own husband follows this story diligently, though he is too much a 'man' to admit that he reads certain LotR fics with aspects of romance, even though he thinks he's doing it 'secretly'.]

I have so far enjoyed the stage you have created for your characters and am patiently awaiting your next chapter. In other words; I want more, more I tell you!

Wed Dec 07, 2005 11:09 am

*BOWS AND KISSES ZEE'S FEET*
I am not worthy, i am not worthy, I am not worthy...
Wonderful, stupendous..superb writing. I love the flow of the story and the secondary characters that have come to light as well. very nice job, can't wait to read more!!!!! Very Happy smiley face

Melissa

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