Reviews for "Rider of the Mark"

Sat Mar 11, 2006 10:16 am

Enjoyed this chapter immensely and I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens nect.

Sat Mar 11, 2006 3:14 pm

Ah Ha! I was expecting that last line at the end--Gamling didn't go up that watchtower for peace and quiet alone!

Excellent update! You made me laugh at and feel sorry for Eomer being treated like a choice piece of meat with a crown on top by all those women. I hope Gamling and Aefre do take a hand in getting him and Lothiriel together. Note to Eomer--a woman with a "wicked sense of humor" might not be as upset by horses mating as you might think.

Good job by Eomer and Gamling of figuring out what to do with Fugol and his younger siblings. It was a nice touch having the tough captain turn out to be the Marshal's wife. Also liked the flashbacks to Eomer's childhood exploits, they help illustrate why he and Gamling are so close.

Looking forward to more wedding shenanigans in the next chapter.

Sat Mar 11, 2006 3:14 pm

Hee! This is such a fun story. Every chapter is so lively and interesting, with real characters. I love stories about what happens after the war, and this one is excellent. It's primarily from the point of view of a minor character, and so much of the Rohan traditions we hear about in it ring true. I don't want this story to end.

Sun Mar 12, 2006 4:54 pm

Oh, I loved it! I'm just waiting for Gamling and Aefre to lock Eomer and Lothiriel in a broom closet or something :0P Wonderful job, keep up the great work! Very Happy smiley face

Sun Mar 19, 2006 4:48 pm

LOL. Oh my goodness...I have not had internet for a month, I am so glad to see that you have updated several times since then. This chapter was fabulous! I have been laughing nonstop the whole time! Absiolutley great!!!! Eomer really has something comming!!!

Fri Apr 21, 2006 7:55 pm

Yay, update! Great chapter too. I was wondering if the news of Aefre's pregnancy was going to come out soon, but I wasn't expecting Arwen to question her in the bath about it. Darned Eldar, can't hide anything from 'em. It was a good idea Aefre had to ask if Elrond could check Gamling's wound. The bath scene was really good and I had quite a chuckle over the the remark about the boys farting in the bath tub!

The scene where Gamling and Eomer were fighting over possession of the spyglass was also funny, especially how Gamling checked Eomer by reminding him Eowyn was down there, and how Eomer asked Gamling's opinion of Lothiriel's, um, charms. Gamling speaking fluent drunkenese at the end was hilarious. I can't wait for the wedding and for Gamling to find out about the baby.

PS--how's that E/L plot bunny doing? Do I need to send some more baby carrots over to nourish it? I would love to read an E/L story of yours, especially if it's the Eomer and Lothiriel from this story. I found it kind of cute how Lothiriel was asking questions in the bath, it was like she was trying to find out what was in store for her if she married Eomer.

Sat Apr 22, 2006 2:27 am

Zee, you wonderful woman. I laughed my head off of the drunken Marshal of the Mark ---- stupid gits to try to drink Gamling under the table. Serves them right, if they have a beastly hangover!!!!! Love it!!!!

Love, Frigg

Thu May 18, 2006 6:22 pm

Just re-reading and re-enjoying some of my favorite chapters. Any chance of an update soon? I miss Gamling, Aefre, and everybody else!

Mon May 22, 2006 7:26 pm

Zee, thanks so much for the "tide-us-over" update--I loved reading more of Gamling's womderful internal monologue as he reflected on his life pre and post-Aefre. He's a lucky man and I'm glad he realizes it.

Take as much time as you like to update, I'll be waiting impatiently to read it ( I would have said "waiting patiently" except I have no patience--it's one of my greatest failings in life) whenever it goes up. Best wishes and happy writing in the meantime.

Sun Jun 25, 2006 11:18 pm

Oh this is so good. I really really like it. Love Gamling but adore Aefre. Is there more? I hope?

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