Reviews for "Rider of the Mark"

Mon Jan 10, 2005 9:34 am

Hi, Zee - I've just re-read the first chapters, and I must admit that I choked - from laughter that is - when I came across the line in the dialogue between Théoden and Éomer about Gamling and his love-life ..... "You are no godlet with wings ...". Knowing that Karl Urban actually played Cupid in "Xena", it is almost hilarious .... but you did know, didn't you???

Mon Jan 10, 2005 11:35 am

Yet another beautifully written , feels like i'm there, chapter! I love how you are writting Gamling. He's so....manly. By that I mean: caught up in his world and dosn't feel the need to complicate things with a woman. Women...he just dosn't get them. But like it or not , his life is getting a lot more complicated. Looking forward to the next installment.

Mon Jan 10, 2005 11:49 am

Yihaa, Zee - this is absolutely great; I do wish that I could write like you ....... I can absolutely picture them; great - great! (By the way, thanks for your review of my story .... glad, you like it; as you can see I have a couple of them by now!) Love, Frigg

Mon Jan 17, 2005 7:54 am

Oh, dear, sweet Zee.

This is coming along beautifully ----- indeed they are doomed (to be together), so perhaps the unruly siblings will have another notch in their hilt .... after all. An another shield maiden of Rohan?! And I wonder, what will Gamling be doing to Éomer when his time comes?? That actually gave me an idea ---- but if you beat me to it, it will be good!

Love, Frigg

Wed Jan 19, 2005 12:40 pm

I loved this sort of format as compared to others actually. Makes the story more relaxed and spontaneous, as if we're riding in their minds. Sometimes it feels like you're sneaking around hearing other people's thoughts that you're not supposed to know about. Wink smiley face

I'm a sucker for angst, but then again, I enjoy many variations of fics, so keep if up Zee ^_~

Wed Jan 19, 2005 4:59 pm

Well peel back another layer of Gamling why don't ya! He is being very clever with Aefre! He knows that if he just asks her information on the trouble with her husbands family he'll be told where to stick it! Instead he is using his head to circumvent her defenses. Clever man.

Wed Jan 19, 2005 11:06 pm

Thanks Frigg. Yes they are so very 'doomed', but I think they really don't mind being doomed as much as they dislike being manipulated into being doomed. And yeah, Gamling will be having the talk with his future monarch come next chapter.

Because he needs it! Twisted Evil smiley face

Luthien: Thanks. This formatting is taking a bit getting used to. I wanted something different, wanted a different thing than, 'well, this isn't going to work,' he thought. I don't know about anyone else, but my mind runs rampant and not in complete sentences. Multitasking is a chore and a half! I thought it would be interesting to get INTO his head and as time goes, hers as well. They are becoming, imo, a rather delightful couple.

Gwynnefar: Gamling isn't dumb, not by a long shot! He's quiet, yes and stands to the back left of the king, yes, but he got in the position he's in by being an intelligent soldier and loyal subject. No ifs ands or buts. So despite the quietness of him, I've garnered a lot from the small, random snippets in the movie of his character. Actions, etc. And yes - he has many layers, as does Aefre. Peeling her like an apple, peeling him like an onion. Some onions are like Valdalia's. Sweeeet sweet things!

Thanks everyone for reading.

Very Happy smiley face

Thu Jan 20, 2005 5:30 am

ZeeDrippyVessel said
> Thanks Frigg. Yes they are so very 'doomed', but I think they really don't mind being doomed as much as they dislike being manipulated into being doomed. And yeah, Gamling will be having the talk with his future monarch come next chapter.
>
> Because he needs it! Twisted Evil smiley face

Oh, yes ---- he certainly does, that brat!
>
> Luthien: Thanks. This formatting is taking a bit getting used to. I wanted something different, wanted a different thing than, 'well, this isn't going to work,' he thought. I don't know about anyone else, but my mind runs rampant and not in complete sentences. Multitasking is a chore and a half! I thought it would be interesting to get INTO his head and as time goes, hers as well. They are becoming, imo, a rather delightful couple.
>
> Gwynnefar: Gamling isn't dumb, not by a long shot! He's quiet, yes and stands to the back left of the king, yes, but he got in the position he's in by being an intelligent soldier and loyal subject. No ifs ands or buts. So despite the quietness of him, I've garnered a lot from the small, random snippets in the movie of his character. Actions, etc. And yes - he has many layers, as does Aefre. Peeling her like an apple, peeling him like an onion. Some onions are like Valdalia's. Sweeeet sweet things!
>
> Thanks everyone for reading.
>
> Very Happy smiley face

Mon Jan 24, 2005 3:09 pm

Zee, You write so well I would pay money to read your grocery list. Can I be President of your Fan Club?

Also **pleasepleaseplease** since they are not elves and not virgins... will the smut now commence?

Mon Jan 24, 2005 10:14 pm

Another great chapter. Feel better soon.

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