Reviews for "Rider of the Mark"

Tue Feb 15, 2005 1:18 am

Thank you everyone for the thoughtful posts. I really wanted to portray Théoden, Eomer, and Eowyn as a family unit - something they aren't often (in fact, I've never seen it) written as. I know Théoden laments that he should have been more a father, but I think there towards the end, he laments a lot of things. Eowyn very much attached and protective of him and I don't think she would be if he had awful to her. That Eomer LOVES Eowyn very much is obvious and I'm not trying to make him a 'brat' (thanks Frigg! lol) as much as I'm trying to build on that sense of humor I know he has as well as REMIND everyone, he was young! (28!) Believe me, he is serious when he needs to be.

You know Viv, you're the second one to mention Legolas' attitude in this chapter. Either my interpretation is off or I missed the boat here. As this story is movie-verse (GASP!) - although I am pulling from canon from it as well), it is so over-whelmingly MALE oriented - Eowyn had to disguise herself to go into battle. In TTT, Théoden sends her off while the MEN go to fight the Wargs - she is likewise put in the caves at Helm's Deep. I find this strange: she is trained for battle obviously, yet not allowed to fight. Before the Rohirrim leave for Gondor, Théoden tells her to sit on the throne 'in his stead'. She isn't expected to go. And I find this very... it's a male chauvenistic centered.

As for the quirky style... that's just me.

Pssst - I like it when Gamling gets all alpha male leadershippy too. Isn't it a turn on?

Wed Feb 16, 2005 9:18 am

Wow!

This is amazing. I read this, pulled out my DVD's of TTT and ROTK and looked harder at Gamling. I'll never look at him the same again! Shocked smiley face

Never thought I would think of someone as sexy as Eomer. You make older men look good, woman!

I will admit to being a little confused at first, but once I got into your stride (you have one) and realizing you put us in Gamling's head, what a ride! You've made this background character VERY interesting. You write very live. It's like being there. I can smell the hay in the barn, it's that real.

Your knowledge of horses is evident. I really appreciated how you showed Eomer caring for his own horse and showed how Gamling nad Aefre care and exercise theirs as well. Watching for foundering and care of the frog of the hoof - you know your stuff. Hats off and when do you update? Very Happy smiley face

Thu Feb 17, 2005 11:36 am

You know, I love Elves. Hot smutty horny Elves. That said - this is wonderful. Who would think quiet, reserved, older Gamling would be so delectable? Part of me is screaming for smut, the other part just wants to enjoy the slow ride. Shocked smiley face

This is without a doubt, the best thing you have ever written. Kudos and when is the next update?

Mon Feb 28, 2005 6:34 pm

You've made Gamling a vivid central character and given fresh perspectives on the core canon characters by doing that so well. The commentary provided by his thoughts/feelings is very effective: it really helps with getting into his head and feeling those emotions. Excellent and addictive story - hope that all is well with you and yours and that you'll be able to give us a fix again soon!

Mon Feb 28, 2005 6:50 pm

*giggles* Gamling is one of the most truthful and honorable men that i've seen portrayed. And you do that for us! *grins* I love the "family unit" aspect of it all. I really do. Zee some of the comments that are made my him in his mind are so funny that i have to sit and laugh my butt off! (and that's alot!) Laughing smiley face

Tue Mar 01, 2005 1:33 am

That should about cover it. I just absolutely love these 2!!!!!!!

Big time kudos to you!
Talasi

Wed Mar 02, 2005 4:52 am

Hi, Zee ---- nice to hear from you again! Another great chapter, and now they are going to war. Will Aefre be joining them, I wonder? And will Éomer grow up? I think that he will!!! He must .... we know that! Giggle, giggle - I am looking so much forward to Aefre and Gamling setting up their revenge - could this involve Lothíriel, or haven't you thought that far yet???

Love, Frigg

Mon Mar 07, 2005 2:11 am

FINALLY!!!!! Awsome smut, Zee!!!! I never thought Gamling would be so incredibly sexy! Your OFC is a breath of fresh air too. I love her attitude. Nobody else could handle Gamling. Bow smiley face

This was, without doubt, the best chapter yet, IMHO. The chaotic scenes with shed clothing and the promise of passion fullfilled were possibly the best I've ever read. Wave smiley face

I need a cold shower now. LOL sign smiley face

I will never ever look at Gamling the same way again. I just can't get enough.

I love the way you interject their chaotic thoughts, just like it would be in real life. It flows very nicely and is a very refreshing style!!

Talasi You rock smiley face

Mon Mar 07, 2005 3:44 am

Aw, wow - Zee! As I've said before - you write'em so well! Gamling will never be the same person again - for any of us! They are CUTE, and I just knew it; they fit so well together. - And thank you for finally letting the "brat" grow up! It was about time ..... waiting impatiently for new chapters .... but I need to take heed, I should never read smut in the office. I am thankful that I have my own office .... Love, Frigg

Mon Mar 07, 2005 10:38 pm

The voice that never stopped in Gamling's head, became mercifully silent

^^loved that line. This whole chapter was a work of art! Zee you are a wonderful author and Gamling...why i think he could make me thud! (that's dangerous... Wink smiley face

) great job and can't wait for more. *hugs and smooches*

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