Reviews for "Rider of the Mark"

Fri Apr 08, 2005 3:16 am

Zee, what a wonderful chapter ... again! And I just knew that this headstrong woman would not let the boys go alone! Teamed up with Éowyn, she will be a good reinforcement to the Riders of Rohan. I love Éomer's frustrations - but perhaps he is just a tiny bit too old to begrudge the older men their lovelife .... after all he is not a teenager anymore?? Anyway, he sure acts like one! Keep it up, oh great woman!

Love, Frigg

Fri Apr 08, 2005 1:55 pm

An amazing story: so real in the way you create the Rohirrim and so unusual in the people you are working with. The storyline is strong, grips the attenrion and is really well written. I love Gamling, his reticence combined with depth. And Aelfre, strong, fiery, assertive, passionate but mature and real is a refreshing change from the teenage fanfic sterotype. Here's to real people! Well done and look forward to the next, more scary chapters.

Mon Apr 11, 2005 3:52 pm

Holy s*** that just blew me away! Crap! Excellent, I'm so excited!!! *does a happy dance*
I will let you in on a little secret, Zee...much as I love elves, I was always always partial to the Riders of Rohan, way back in 1978 when I first read LOTR...and they are my favorite part of the movies also...and You Rock Girlfriend!
Thank you for writing this great story!
Sincerely,
Sakai

Fri Apr 15, 2005 1:42 pm

Oh, geez, Zee...just what I needed...ANOTHER story of YOURS to be addicted to....

I love your portrayal of Éomer! And who'd have thought Gamling could be so...interesting?

Keep going, please!

Nove

Mon Apr 18, 2005 4:34 am

dear lord! Has Aefre been found out! (i would say so..lol)

Mon Apr 18, 2005 9:15 am

This is just so....so.. .wonderful and frustrating and wow, more please?? I just love the way you portray the horselords, all of them! So no fangirly! they are alive and masculine and real and you just fall in love with all of them!! Again, you are crafting another masterpiece! Bravo!

Mon Apr 25, 2005 1:17 am

very frustrating (save for the horses...) indeed! wonderful chapter and i'm looking forward to more. This is a very intricately woven story that sucks the person in with the opening of the first chapter's title! keep it up!

Wed May 04, 2005 11:27 am

Love the plot twist about A's "in laws". Thank you for posting more..............its just perfect.

Fri May 06, 2005 6:40 am

Awwwww, that's so good, Zee ------ "tastes like something Éowyn could have concocted " ...... I bet she did. Love your description of them both missing each other ... especially Aefre. Could you please turn up the speed, I want to know more .................. (sigh, I still wish I could write like you). Love, Frigg

Fri May 06, 2005 3:30 pm

Once again Zee this is absolutely wonderful! once again you turn out a chapter that pulls, soothes, hits, and comforts like that of the relationship of Aefre and Gamling. Poor Aefre and poor Gamling! they feel so bad and Theoden is trying to help.

You make these men...actual men! not some floweredly people who know always exactly what to do; no these are men who DO make mistakes and rightly so! You enusre that the reader knows a man would do that and more than 1 man has! great job

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