Reviews for "The Trees Remember"

Wed Jan 19, 2005 8:33 pm

Vannums???? Update please?????? Soon smiley face

Sat Jan 22, 2005 12:12 pm

Chapter 7 moves at a really good pace. Your action scenes are exciting and not too wordy, but still have enough description etc to give a good idea of the urgency and situation. I loved the first paragraph in fact, with Haldir's casual reaction to the SS guy, just disarming him like that. Very suave and cool. (I was thinking the guy would be Gestapo, actually, at the end of chapter 6 - the black coat and hat just made me think of Allo Allo.. Laughing smiley face

). Seriously though, very exciting story, and I don't mind having to wait for updates, so long as they keep on coming... Very Happy smiley face

Sat Jan 22, 2005 4:46 pm

most "elves falling into earth stories" are mary-sueish and boring. yours is exciting, mixing humor with danger and always adding to the suspense. would a cookie entice you to update sooner? Wink smiley face

Tue Jan 25, 2005 9:37 am

I think this is my favourite chapter so far to be honest (chapter 8 that is). I'm liking the new details you're giving about Elaneth, and the little hints about her character. From this chapter, I'm really interested now in what she's *not* giving away, and I particularly liked the scene with Haldir - was it me or was there a little connection there? Twisted Evil smiley face

Through his arrogance and her defensiveness, I thought I could see a potential mutual liking. (I know how awkward that sentence sounds, but I can't think how to say what I mean. Hopefully you'll understand me from that.)

Anyway, another bloomin' cliffhanger! Evil or Very Mad smiley face

(actually I love chapters that end that way). I usually never do this in reviews but I am going to beg - please update soon!!! I'm starting to feel fangirly about this story. Very Happy smiley face

Tue Jan 25, 2005 9:10 pm

very nice! by the by - who exactly is elaneth descended from? how many elves are there left on earth in the story?

Sat Jan 29, 2005 4:26 pm

Just wanted to let you know that I am still reading and enjoying this. You've got a great suspense factor still going on here and I love the interactions between the characters. Being a real fan of Thranduil, I thoroughly loved seeing him. And the scenes on the ship were very well done. Scary. Looking forward to more.

Thu Feb 03, 2005 5:47 am

Wow Vannums, that was so great. Haldir has a personality, who knew? The scene in the passageway of the ship was done wonderfully, the tension you built had me holding my breath, girl. I'm with Space in that this is my favorite chapter so far. Keep em coming!

Jesxxx

Sun Feb 06, 2005 10:25 am

interesting developments! i absolutely cannot wait for london! that was a very sneaky move on the nazis part - i had forgotten that they did that. it's terrible how many innocent people died in those power-gaining plays.

conitnue, por favor!

Mon Feb 07, 2005 8:54 pm

Still loving this. I particularly enjoyed the hand suddenly lying on the floor. Awesome. Poor elves in planes. Smile smiley face

Mon Feb 07, 2005 9:44 pm

now i see why you told me andre and elaneth couldn't be lovers.......... Wink smiley face

! imagining elves in an airplane is a hard thing to do - i suppose they'll always belong beneath the trees, although iw ouldn't complain if a few of them dropped into my home!

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