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SpaceWeavil

Joined: 27 May 2004 Reviews: 365
Location: Looking at shiny things
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Thu Feb 10, 2005 2:23 pm
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Yay, new chapters All up the usual, great standard. One thing - I love the fact that Elaneth talks about 'The British' throughout this and not just 'The English'. I know that abroad, quite often Britain is just referred to as 'England', but the Scottish Nationalist in me gets narked by that. So many thanks. Also it was so cool to see Highgate Village get a mention. I'd forgotten about that. Excellent as usual. |
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Ceorcan
Joined: 10 Feb 2005 Reviews: 2
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Thu Feb 10, 2005 3:32 pm
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Hi! I'm new here, and I've been reading your story the last days. I was intrigued (because I don't like modern time stories) and I found that I liked it very much: I have never seen a story about Tolkien and II World War. After seeing in TV last week what objects the nazis were searching in my country (think on Indiana Jones) I'm wondering what they would have wanted of the elves if they were, in fact, living in that time.
By the way, I liked the bit about the sound of german airplanes. My grandmother still has nightmares about them, she is terrified of planes because of that, so many years after the bombings. |
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Texasgirl

Joined: 18 Oct 2004 Reviews: 112
Location: Texas (no shit, sherlock)
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Thu Feb 10, 2005 4:41 pm
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| i think i've really run out of things to write - i can't be contructive cuz i find nothing that i could possible critisize - and i'm running out of ways to say "that was one hell of a chapter" to you! |
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Texasgirl

Joined: 18 Oct 2004 Reviews: 112
Location: Texas (no shit, sherlock)
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Sun Feb 13, 2005 2:37 pm
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| oh wow...this story is like a good pice of cake - once you eat the first slice, you are not satisfied until your have eaten the whole thing! |
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ellisk

Joined: 24 Jan 2004 Reviews: 310
Location: Icon by Alassante! Wow!
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Sun Feb 13, 2005 3:34 pm
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| This just keeps getting better and better. Good job. It's hard to maintain the intrigue but you are definitely doing it. |
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picara

Joined: 08 Aug 2004 Reviews: 73
Location: Doriath
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Wed Feb 16, 2005 10:36 am
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| Wow. This is really good. I love the elves' reactions to modern things (like planes etc) and the evil Nazi/SS/Sauron connection. The detail is really rich. The characterization of the canon and OCs is great. And I love the pacing. You are slipping things out to us in a way that keeps me coming back. Great work. |
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Texasgirl

Joined: 18 Oct 2004 Reviews: 112
Location: Texas (no shit, sherlock)
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Fri Feb 25, 2005 10:48 pm
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omg - that's all i can say right now. but isn't since hitler is a maia (very nice twist!) shouldn't he be able to sense the elves?
sorry i missed reviewing last chapter. |
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MorwynYlodau
Joined: 26 Feb 2005 Reviews: 1
Location: some realm that is now long gone
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Fri Feb 25, 2005 10:56 pm
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THis story is very intriging and unique. Yor history is quite correct from what i've read so far. Conrats.
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Vendie

Joined: 01 May 2004 Reviews: 59
Location: Iowa, USA
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Sat Mar 05, 2005 12:59 pm
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This is AMAZING! I feel rather badly about not coming back and reading whenever you updated, because I've clearly been missing out! I like how the story has progressed - it's only gotten better since I last read it You truly are a talented writer and I can't wait to read more of this! |
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Texasgirl

Joined: 18 Oct 2004 Reviews: 112
Location: Texas (no shit, sherlock)
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Mon Mar 07, 2005 6:24 pm
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you are one mean woman, vana - how will i possibly sleep at nights thinking of a cliffie like THAT?!?!
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please please please PLEASE update soon! |
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