Reviews for "The Trees Remember"

Sat Mar 12, 2005 2:57 pm

DAMMIT! Why did you have to stop there?! T_T I'm on the edge of my seat for the next chapter!

Your descriptions of the landscape and the what happened to Elaneth were so real that I could *see* them happening. It was amazing. I really can't wait for the next chapter. Great writing, as always Very Happy smiley face

Sat Mar 12, 2005 8:33 pm

I've just had to catch up on about four chapters as my alert thingies haven't been telling me about this story. Everything's still moving along extremely well. I wish I had your skills in keeping the story well paced and interesting throughout your chapters. One thing that is really striking me as good is that you've kept the elves 'in character' and their reactions to the modern world are very believable. I'm really not keen on modern day fics where the elves are just the same as humans. Also I've no problem with your stretching the boundaries of the Roman Empire - I mean, most of Caledonia wasn't in the Roman Empire, but they still traded and dealt with the peoples there, so it's perfectly feasible that the 'boudaries' wouldn't be as definite as some historical atlases would have us believe.

Sun Mar 13, 2005 3:58 am

Congratulations! This story is very well written, highly interesting and with a nice plot. Please continue soon.

Sun Mar 13, 2005 11:16 am

You have me absolutely fascinated with Elennath's (sp? sorry, I can't spell my on OC's names without my beta's help Smile smiley face

) past and the identity of Hitler and Mussulini (sp? not modern history major either). This story is just great. I love the pacing--the way you are unveiling these mysteries slowly. And I love your OC. She just fascinates me, as I said. Great job.

Sun Mar 13, 2005 4:27 pm

*gasp*

vana.... Bawl smiley face

Mon Mar 14, 2005 5:53 am

been following this story for a LOOOOONNG time now Very Happy smiley face

I love how you combine the history of WWII with Tolkien's world. I never would've thought it would go that well together. very very cool Hippy smiley face

and I adore your style of writing Smile smiley face

Your OC is very realistic and completely believeable, and the plot is carried along nicely.

Keep up the excellent work.

Wed Apr 06, 2005 3:59 pm

Vana!!!!

How long will we have to wait on the edge of this cliff!!! hehehehe When is the next chapter headed our way. Can't wait!

Literally......can't!

hehehe

Kym

Wed Apr 06, 2005 8:06 pm

Ha! I wondered when you would get around to telling them about elves, toys and cookies. At least I hoped you would! That was hilarious. I can just imagine the look on Haldir's face! And I am rolling thinking about Thranduil's reaction when he first heard it. That was great.

Thu Apr 07, 2005 7:52 am

*“How can an Elf and a Dwarf be mistaken?”*

Excellent!!!

No wonder Haldir felt insulted Shocked smiley face

He... a dwarf...? And even worse: a tiny small creature, looking... ladylike? Very Happy smiley face

I love it! I wish I could have seen their faces.

And I like the end of this chapter: songs and feelings behind them... Very touching.

Thu Apr 07, 2005 8:52 am

It's cool to imagine elves in our world, and I agree with Robin, I'd given almost everything to see the look on their faces... feminine faeries indeed ROFL smiley face

Plus, the songs are a nice touch indeed Smile smiley face

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