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Texasgirl

Joined: 18 Oct 2004 Reviews: 112
Location: Texas (no shit, sherlock)
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Wed May 25, 2005 4:15 pm
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Damn, Haldir was being an arrogant little prick, wasn't he?
Vana, I think Elaneth should make him pay for that!!!
But then I think they should make out (er UP!) afterwards. Hehehe.... |
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ellisk

Joined: 24 Jan 2004 Reviews: 310
Location: Icon by Alassante! Wow!
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Sun May 29, 2005 1:31 pm
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Sorry I have been so bad about reviewing lately--I have been hopelessly behind on every task recently. But I have been reading and loving it. You are doing a wonderful job mixing our world and Tolkien's. I have really enjoyed it. And playing with the romance--loved that of course. But needless to say, the 'prophecy' at the end of this last chapter scare the you-know-what out of me. Too many of my favorite characters are dying in stories recently. Don't kill anyone. Please 
I am just amazed at what a great job you are doing with this--love it! |
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Texasgirl

Joined: 18 Oct 2004 Reviews: 112
Location: Texas (no shit, sherlock)
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Mon May 30, 2005 1:13 pm
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can we place bets on who is going to be shot?
i vote that the elves won't, but serawe will die letting them escape. |
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
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Mon May 30, 2005 1:45 pm
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Please, do not kill anyone  |
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ellisk

Joined: 24 Jan 2004 Reviews: 310
Location: Icon by Alassante! Wow!
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Sat Jun 11, 2005 3:42 pm
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This chapter was great! The elves' irritation at being left out of the planning was great and I was worried right along with them as to what was going on until you revealed it. And this sequence: Do you know what a Senator is?... I rolled at the answer. However, from the dialogue with the ambassador, Thranduil will be paying you a visit for refering to him as anyone's lap dog. And of course the end--you are growing far too fond of these cliffhangers. Update quickly. I just can't get over how much this story pulls me in.  |
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Neniel

Joined: 30 Dec 2004 Reviews: 49
Location: Hiding from the men in white. Contrary to common belief, psychiatrists are *very* sneaky people
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Sat Jun 11, 2005 5:20 pm
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Yay! Another chapter! I'll go read it immediately!
Seriously though, this story is turning out great! And I love the fact that Haldir and Elaneth are both too headstrong to get sickeningly along! ^_^ It's what makes things more interesting! Although I kinda feel sorry for Haldir sometimes... It seems harder for him having to back down to another's opinions, even if Elaneth is practicaly the head of this mission and he has such a soft spot for her.
I'll get back to my new chapter now!
*grin* |
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
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Mon Jun 13, 2005 10:44 am
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Okay, I had a heart attack 
Now I can read this chapter again, peacefully. |
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Texasgirl

Joined: 18 Oct 2004 Reviews: 112
Location: Texas (no shit, sherlock)
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Mon Jun 13, 2005 6:47 pm
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Holy crap Elaneth was scared!
But if I had been in that situation, I'd've probably already wetted my pants several times over!!  |
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StArSpLaSh

Joined: 18 Jan 2004 Reviews: 93
Location: Texas, U.S.A.
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Tue Jun 14, 2005 2:26 am
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| I never thought I would read a story like this... I'm ssoo glad I am it's really interesting! I hope you update soon!! |
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
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Tue Jun 21, 2005 11:18 am
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I need to say that I was really afraid to read this chapter. After your latest PM I suspected something terrible would happen. And I was right... Poor Haldir I hope he will recover. I feel sorry for Elaneth. She was pushed beyond her limits.
Great job, Vana, another brilliant chapter.
Binka |
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