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Texasgirl

Joined: 18 Oct 2004 Reviews: 112
Location: Texas (no shit, sherlock)
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Tue Jun 28, 2005 10:45 am
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Oooo! I was shuddering through the surgery scene - you certainly know how to write gore!
But anyway....care to explain Elaneth's lack of emotions while killing?
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Texasgirl

Joined: 18 Oct 2004 Reviews: 112
Location: Texas (no shit, sherlock)
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Wed Jun 29, 2005 12:29 pm
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*gasp* Vana!!!
The suspense is killing me....it will be my downfall, I swear... |
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Neniel

Joined: 30 Dec 2004 Reviews: 49
Location: Hiding from the men in white. Contrary to common belief, psychiatrists are *very* sneaky people
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Wed Jun 29, 2005 4:21 pm
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*frozen speechless* You killed them! *shakes head in denial* No, no, no, no...
*sniff* OK, I know every good author has to throw in a cliffie every now and then to keep the readers on their toes, but this is plain evil!!!
Please, update soon, please? I mean, can't let those poor elves in fear of death and misery now, can we? *puppy dog eyes*
Oh, and I loved the 'medical' part from the last chapter!c Great work!!!
PS: Don't mind me, the heavy studying for my spring exams (spring, hah! it's almost July!!!) has finelly addled my mind.... My brain is like a puddle on my desk, surrounding a pile of hideous books of monstrous dimensions... (poor Neniel ) |
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ellisk

Joined: 24 Jan 2004 Reviews: 310
Location: Icon by Alassante! Wow!
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Wed Jun 29, 2005 7:40 pm
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Ok, now this chapter's cliffie was just mean! A soldier at the mouth of the cave and blown up cars!? You had better get an update posted fast! I did enjoy the few bones you threw us though--the comic relief of driving the car and plucking the quail. This was a great chapter. You really know how to turn up the tension. (I meant what I said about a fast update. ) |
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Amara

Joined: 19 Mar 2004 Reviews: 3
Location: US of A
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Mon Jul 04, 2005 2:16 pm
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| I absolutely LOVE this story; I've been following it since the third chapter, and you are such an excellent writer, Vana. You have really captured the essence of what I think Tolkien would've wanted for his Elves, including the ones that were left behind, and your understanding of historical events mixed with fiction is without comparison. This chapter was extremely well written, and I look forward to reading the next one. |
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Texasgirl

Joined: 18 Oct 2004 Reviews: 112
Location: Texas (no shit, sherlock)
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Thu Jul 07, 2005 4:13 pm
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Crapadolie Vana!
Wow....I now see how the sneek peak you gave me fits in - and it does, perfectly. I really love that little segment - it's like a single ray of sunshine on a cloudy day.
Aren't I being poetic?
I'm definitely looking forward to the final confrontation, as well as the reactions of "Eladir." (Hey, if there can be TomKat and Bennifer, than I think we can have our Eladir!) |
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
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Tue Jul 12, 2005 12:53 am
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I'm back and I finally read chapters 26 and 27.
I'm very glad to see that Haldir recovered, and that you gave Elaneth an opportunity to tell her story.
Great, great job, Vana!
Can't wait to read more  |
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Amara

Joined: 19 Mar 2004 Reviews: 3
Location: US of A
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Wed Jul 13, 2005 6:43 pm
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Excellent, you really know how to keep us going, don't you? I love this story. Please, oh, please, continue |
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ellisk

Joined: 24 Jan 2004 Reviews: 310
Location: Icon by Alassante! Wow!
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Wed Jul 13, 2005 8:05 pm
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Sorry. I have been reading, I just have been having to download and read fast because I've been buried, so I've been bad about reviews...
I love the back story that you have put in these last to chapters. Elaneth is more and more interesting--even when you reveal details, you build more mystery. And I can't believe you left us hanging on Legolas and the twins until this last chapter! That was sooo mean. Now that they are splitting up, I think I am even more worried about them. I am just dying to know where all this is going. |
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Neniel

Joined: 30 Dec 2004 Reviews: 49
Location: Hiding from the men in white. Contrary to common belief, psychiatrists are *very* sneaky people
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Thu Jul 14, 2005 4:33 pm
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Yuppie! Elves not dead or seriously mutilated or rendered invalid in any other way!
No, seriously though, I liked the new chapters, as always! But it got me thinking, Elaneth has a different kind of power, she's more of a diplomat than a warrior. How does Haldir really feel about it? They do copliment each other in a weird way though. They have both been 'warriors' and 'embassadors', but Haldir holds mostly to the 'warrior' part while Elaneth to the 'embassador' one...
I just love thinking into this story! |
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