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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
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Fri Jul 15, 2005 4:20 am
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I liked this chapter very much.
Now I wonder what is going to happen with the elves. An odd feeling disturbs me that Haldir and Elaneth, though left alone, will handle much better than others. What else have you prepared for Legolas and co.???
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Texasgirl

Joined: 18 Oct 2004 Reviews: 112
Location: Texas (no shit, sherlock)
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Thu Jul 21, 2005 6:31 pm
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By the Valar, Vana! Way to leave us (coughcoughMEcoughcouch) hanging! Cruel, cruel, girl.  |
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Texasgirl

Joined: 18 Oct 2004 Reviews: 112
Location: Texas (no shit, sherlock)
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Thu Aug 04, 2005 10:50 am
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| This is one hell of a climatic build-up, Vana. Way to keep up the suspense! |
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
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Thu Aug 04, 2005 11:14 am
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Exquisite was the word that came to Elaneth’s mind, and yet, that was not strong enough to describe the sight of Haldir in all his majesty.
My first thought was "Hell, yeah, nothing compares to him."
*sigh*
You built such tension between them. Now I'm dying to see what is going to happen. |
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FallingIntoStrangers

Joined: 23 Oct 2004 Reviews: 16
Location: USA
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Sat Aug 06, 2005 12:48 am
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ooooo momma this is getting freakishly good.... ppppllllllllllllleasssssse write more....
(So did the Holy roman Empire sidebar come from an old SNL sketch? "I am now fahklempt... talk amongst yahselves.... I'll give yeh a tawpic... the Holy Roman Empire was neither Holy, Roman, nor an empire... DISCUSS!!!!" Back when SNL was funny.... |
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Lainien

Joined: 11 Aug 2005 Reviews: 24
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Thu Aug 11, 2005 1:46 pm
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| I really love this fic--I've been lurking and reading it for a while but a friend talked me into registering and reviewing. I really like the elves in the modern world and the mystery they are unraveling. You keep the story really tense, do a great job with the characters and stick to canon/history. Love it! |
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AngmarofCarnDum

Joined: 15 May 2005 Reviews: 24
Location: Carn Dum... where the weather is cold and the women are hot
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Thu Aug 25, 2005 6:05 pm
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Vana,
I started reading this story when I saw that it was set in 1942. Since that is the year that I was born, sometimes I feel like the elves returning to Middle-earth, out of time period. (No, I do not mind at all at admitting my age). I was curious to see how you would handle what I considered "my own time period," since I grew up in the post-war period. You are doing a very admirable job. The reactions of the Elves to all the changes is very good. I started reading yesterday and I am now on Chapter 6. It will be very interesting to see what happens to the elves when they get to Europe and the reactions to all that Hitler has brought about.
You have bitten off a difficult subject, a futuristic AU, and you are handling it very well. I will stay reading.
There is only one thing, and this is minor: few people (outside of those directly connected) were aware of the atrocities that Hilter was perpetrating on the Jews, Gypsies and other minority groups. Years after the war, a friend of my father's, a GI who had marched into the area of the Dauchau concentration camp, said that the soldiers could smell it miles before they ever got there. Truly, this was a horrific time in the ages of Arda. This is a very challenging subject and I am glad someone is exploring it. Good job! |
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RobinKa

Joined: 29 Mar 2005 Reviews: 1118
Location: Wherever I may roam
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Fri Aug 26, 2005 2:22 am
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It's good to know a helping hand is on its way 
I like the way you introduced Colin and his father is this chapter. As for the stranger, I'd vote for Gandalf, but well, I might be wrong. After all I'm only a mere human 
Thanks
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Neniel

Joined: 30 Dec 2004 Reviews: 49
Location: Hiding from the men in white. Contrary to common belief, psychiatrists are *very* sneaky people
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Sat Aug 27, 2005 5:02 am
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Mithrandir! I'm voting for Gandalf, hands down. Please? It would be great to have him in the story! And Colin with his dog Mellon are going to be a pleasure to read about, I'm already waiting fot the chapters to come just to see the elves' reactions to the young boy! Ooooh, this fic is just getting better and better, thanks for keeping us on our toes!!! |
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Texasgirl

Joined: 18 Oct 2004 Reviews: 112
Location: Texas (no shit, sherlock)
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Sun Sep 11, 2005 5:37 pm
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Vana!! I haven't checked in this in such a long time - sorry! Good Gawd, this chapter is intense!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*interupted for squealing, and calming excersizes*
PLEASE update soon!! |
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