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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 269
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Wed Jul 13, 2005 10:58 am
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I loved this chapter!
Although I already knew that they Celeborn and Tari loves each other, it was great to see what their friends had to say about their relationship. I loved the conversations that each group had about the problems, or at least perceived problems in their relationship. Thranduil and Glin are such wonderful characters. I loved them in Thranduil's Bargains, and am thrilled to see them in this story as well. Fantastic.
Something that really stands out in your writing is your use of animals. I *LOVE* the way you personify your animals, and give them human-like characterizations and personalities. The minx, the warg, Dolen...to me, they are all important characters, that have consistantly reflected the moods of the characters. Fabulous! I love it!
Great job! I'll be looking forward to your next update!
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Anieni
Joined: 27 Jan 2004
Reviews: 48
Location: Somewhere between fantasy and reality
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Sun Jul 24, 2005 9:18 pm
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OMG! It was perfect! and she is going to have a baby? I could not ask for more.. well another update but I don't want to push my luck 
Hope life is treating you well dear! |
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Havetoist
Joined: 14 Apr 2004
Reviews: 29
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Sun Jul 24, 2005 9:26 pm
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A baby? What a surprise!
And as always you never fail to deliver. Pardon the pun. |
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Shanalir
Joined: 27 Feb 2005
Reviews: 183
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Mon Jul 25, 2005 5:39 pm
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Oooooooooooooooh, love the new chapter sooooooooo much! She's pregnant?!?!?!!? I guess that's a sign that their union is favored by the Valar. Please update soon?  I'm really really really looking forward to finding out more. This story is absolutely captivating! |
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Shanalir
Joined: 27 Feb 2005
Reviews: 183
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Sun Aug 07, 2005 9:58 pm
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| Oh, wow! I love everyone's reaction to the baby. Please don't tell me you're ending the story here! it's OK< though, if you wrap up a few of the last little ends in pod's story. I hope this one has one more chapter or so coming, anyway. Great job! I love these stories of yours. |
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Anieni
Joined: 27 Jan 2004
Reviews: 48
Location: Somewhere between fantasy and reality
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Sun Aug 14, 2005 8:28 pm
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*sigh* took me too long to find time to come and read this, makes me sad because it is SO awesome!! I will have to read it one more time just to feel better hee hee!
I guess my question about Pod has been answered... unless you have a suprise hidden under your sleeve? Or Dolen might have!
Hope you are doing great and looking forward to the next update.
Hugs,
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 269
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Sat Aug 20, 2005 9:47 pm
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I really love the pairing of Tari and Celeborn. In the scene where they are in the tree together, and the child comes by and catches a glimpse of them, I can almost feel Celeborn's happiness. He seems so youthful and joyful in this story. His excitement over the baby was fantastic.
I really enjoyed this chapter. Great job!
Michelle... |
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griffon
Joined: 14 Jan 2007
Reviews: 6
Location: Normandy
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Tue May 22, 2007 12:08 pm
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| I have read all three of your Maia-stories. They are absolutely wonderful, well-written, witty and highly entertaining. Many thanks for these great moments of distraction and fun! |
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SilvaraDragontear
Joined: 13 Mar 2007
Reviews: 6
Location: In my fort of books
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Fri Oct 03, 2008 7:07 am
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Great story just like the others that you wrote, love your take on Thranduil (hope I spelled his name right), and I adore Dolen. I want a dragon like that.
So are we going to find out some day if Pod and Faron manage to start something with eachother? |
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