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Viv
Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
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Sat Sep 10, 2005 11:14 pm
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| Well, I'm glad the twins were there to talk some sense into our heroes! But poor Elrohir. And even poorer Thengel: I doubt somebody that age can understand the delicious ache of angst. But at least his folks are together now. Yay for making up! |
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rohanion
Joined: 09 Feb 2005
Reviews: 216
Location: uk
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Sun Sep 18, 2005 4:25 am
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Hi Alassante,
Just devoured chapter 12 with relish! I was happily reading away taking in their banter and arguments when suggenly I read this line - "Suddenly, he grabbed her and pulled her to him in a deep kiss. Picking her feet up off the floor, he held her as he kissed her until she was breathless. His kiss was forceful as he laid siege to her mouth, overwhelming her with his passion. When he finally pulled away, she was gasping for air." 
What I want to know is "WHY DOES THIS NEVER HAPPEN TO ME?"  its not fair!
Seriously though, a wonderful chapter, can't believe they are actually getting married at last! Unless of course you have any other surprises in store for your readers?
Brilliant writing, I love this story so much
Rohannion |
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evenstar5
Joined: 20 Mar 2005
Reviews: 61
Location: usa
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Wed Oct 05, 2005 11:46 am
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Hey Al,
Beautiful chapter. Chapter 13 was so wonderful. Love scenes just great. I can't wait to see what the next chapter unviels. Update soon.
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Yavanie
Joined: 02 Jun 2004
Reviews: 122
Location: Texas
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Thu Oct 27, 2005 1:54 pm
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| Wow! I finally got to catch up on the last three chapters! Yeah, if I were in her shoes, don't think I could keep my hands off that horse lord either! As always, couldn't stop reading, just had to see what was going to happen next - and then get left hanging! Well missy, the next chapter better be in beta!!!! I can't decide who my favorite character is. I can so identify with many of Amrun's feelings but Thengel is just precious!!!!! |
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ellisk
Joined: 24 Jan 2004
Reviews: 310
Location: Icon by Alassante! Wow!
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Thu Oct 27, 2005 8:27 pm
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Ok, I have owed you a review on this for soooo long. This is a wonderful story. I love Amrun in it. She is a really strong character but at the same time, she is faced with so many really incredible challenges, not the least of which in the recent chapters, trying to adapt to being the new Queen of Rohan. I think you do a really realistic job of showing that she is not going to just marry and live happily ever after in such a situation--it just wouldn't be realistic. It's too much of a radical change to expect everything to be smooth. Especially considering that people are going to have questions about Thengel. I think you have really shown the difficulties Amrun was bound to experience in a really poignant way.
And the hot, steamy sex doesn't hurt either. I mean--this last chapter started with two solid pages of hot, steamy lovin'. What more can I ask for.
Love the story and love the characters and I'm sorry for being such a lousy reviewer. |
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Rhapsody
Joined: 11 Apr 2004
Reviews: 479
Location: Maglor's Lap
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Sun Oct 30, 2005 4:36 pm
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Oh Alassante, what a incredibly great story to read. Often I felt so deeply for your Amrun and wanted to shake your Éomer out of that insanity, but it is so great to read them growing closer and with so much passion and love... yum! Also, besides the two being together  , I love the manner how you describe how Amrun tries to get adjusted to court life, it's servants and all the disadvantages that come along with living such a public life. Court gossip, servants walking into them, wee little Thengel running around.. I just adore him. And with the cliffhanger you leave us at the end of chapter 14... don't let us wait too long! |
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evenstar5
Joined: 20 Mar 2005
Reviews: 61
Location: usa
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Mon Oct 31, 2005 8:13 am
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| I can't belive I forgot to review. I loved the last chapter #14. This story is getting better and better. Al, you are a wonderful writer. The way Amrun handled those two gagling females after Eomer was great. I love the romance and love in this story. You capture the characters so well. Can't wait to read chapter 15. |
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LadyofRohan
Joined: 02 Jul 2005
Reviews: 19
Location: The Plains of Rohan...er...Kansas
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Sat Dec 10, 2005 8:03 pm
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Great chapter! (14) The sex just gets steamier and steamier!  Quick! Write more! I am dying to see how you get these two right with the world. |
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LydiaB
Joined: 19 Nov 2005
Reviews: 68
Location: Russia
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Fri Dec 16, 2005 7:57 pm
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| Just read chapters 1 to 14 in one great long gallop and am now relaxing with a ciggy, quite exhausted. Nothing like a good fix of Eomer before bedtime. I look forward to the next chapter! |
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Sulriel
Joined: 07 Jan 2004
Reviews: 327
Location: Imladris (or maybe Texas ...)
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Wed Apr 05, 2006 7:05 am
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It's good to see an update on this one, glad to hear the Muses are back and in good working order!  |
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