Joined: 13 Dec 2004 Reviews: 25
Location: Cardinal Rule 1: Never state your location.
Sun Jan 23, 2005 12:21 pm
Aww. That's both sweet and sad! Will you add more chapters to it?
SpaceWeavil
Joined: 27 May 2004 Reviews: 365
Location: Looking at shiny things
Sun Jan 23, 2005 2:28 pm
This is quite a nice scene, and nicely written too. It is rather short and the end does feel like the beginning of something, IMO, though. So are you going to carry on with the idea?
SecretKeeper
Joined: 13 Dec 2004 Reviews: 25
Location: Cardinal Rule 1: Never state your location.
Sun Feb 06, 2005 9:32 pm
I want to cry from the second chapter. IT was awesome!